That was great! Seriously, I was hooked from the beginning on

Wonderful adventure story, will definitely have to read Union.

kso ;
i totally just found this
and i has to save it ;
so i can finish it !
:)

A very wise man had once written: “It is the stupidest of children who act childish, and the most tiresome of adults who act grown up.”

Indeed.

Amazing, simply amazing. Great way to make an AU. If there wasn't the final season, I would've made this my unofficial canon.

FAV!

So the drama is still ongoing... I love this story, especially the illustratons that accompany it.
Looks like Ron is really good at creating a romantic evening, perhaps Kim will regret the breakup?

I have just finished the long, exhaustive, and thoroughly satisfactory task of reading this entire story. My cap is doffed to your skill as a master of a storyteller. Every aspect of a good story is found within this tale. Romance? Check. Adventure? Double check. Humor, mystery, wonderful dialogue, and intriguing descriptions? Check.

I have to say, if ever you decide to publish your own original fiction, I would be willing to pay a pretty penny to own it.

And now, off to the enjoyable task of reading UNION. Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful tale with us, your avid readers.

Namaste,
Angel

Oh! Wow...That sounded rude of me, didn't it? I don't hate the story, I hate what certain people are doing, namely the 'evil' people...*weak smile* Sorry...

Booyah! probably one of the best stories that i have read in a while. REUNION is what every fanfiction story should strive to accomplish. I'm half way threw the sequel and The only thing that worries me is that fact that when i am finished that, then this story line will actually be done. I have to ask though, have you ever wonder about updating the stories so that Season 4 fits with them? just wondering

I'm just now reading this because of a picture I saw on DA. I'm loving and hating it at the moment...Very eager to continue, your an amazing writer. :3

Your story was listed as one of Mr. Dr. P's favorites, and I'm so glad! It was absolutely engrossing. I'm not going to dissect it right now, but suffice to say, I'm going to be reading all of your work in the near future!

It’s official; THAT was good.
I particularly found the style of story-telling you used here- writing some scenes in the present and subsequently linking them to something that had taken place in the past- to be very enjoyable; it reminded me of the narrative style used in my favourite book (‘IT’ by Stephen King, in case you wanted to know), and you used it to its fullest possible extent.
And as for the creation of Raymond Beam…
Nice job there, really; you managed to make him go from the guy we only disliked in the first few chapters- on the grounds that HE’S engaged to Kim rather than Ron- to someone we actively hated as soon as we really got to know him.
I mean, not only does he want Kim to be essentially his PROPERTY, but he’s cheating on her with SHEGO?
And that’s even BEFORE you factor in his… other activities; when we found out about that, I didn’t know whether to think of him as being arrogant or stupid in thinking that Kim wouldn’t start to suspect SOMETHING was wrong after a while if he’d kept that kind of thing up after their marriage!
(Then, of course, his REAL plan was revealed and I upgraded him from ‘arrogant git’ to ‘insane psychopathic would-be despot’; nice touch with the clone concept, by the way, even if I do think you could have maybe drawn that part of the plot out a bit more before you revealed the full details of his scheme to the reader)
I suppose the only consolation about his engagement to Kim is the fact that he was definitely good at the whole ‘lying to women to get what he wanted’ thing he had going on; at least you made it clear that Kim wasn’t just so depressed after things didn’t work out with Ron that she fell into a relationship with the first guy she ran into who showed some kind of interest in her.
On the topic of Kim and Ron, I particularly liked the way you had Ron come into his own here. I’ve read too many stories where it seems like the writers think that Ron can only be effective as a solo operative if KIM screws up her life somehow- she leaves Ron for a prat, something like that-, but here Ron actually becomes a good independent because HE messed up and left Kim; Kim might not have done well at the whole ‘mission’ thing after Ron left, but that was still because of HIM rather than anything SHE did.
And as for the final moments, as the two of them came together again at long last…
Beautiful, really; once again after so many years, the status quo has been restored, along with some HIGHLY amusing additions.
Well, keep up the good work!

Oh My God! i love this story. incredibly well written and thought out. the transitions for the flash backs were very done seamlessly. the transitions were smooth and almost magical. the story in itself was incredibly well thought out and i didnt expect half the stuff that happened. original and very creative.

i really did love the more emotional parts of the story. u know how it feels when you watch a show or read a series for a long time you really get into the story and to an extent feel what the character feel? this story did it for me, i got tears in the more emotionally intense parts of the story. i have spent about 10 hours reading this and its about 5am now and i am glad i did. thank you for writing this and i will be reading the rest of your work for as long as you post.

Thinks u should win awards for writing.
Ernest.

Simply the best, most beautiful and terrific story I'v eve read.

good good story