Nice story. I enjoyed hearing Sam's thoughts, especially about her dad. Good job putting the scenes from the show into the story. Keeping it flowing into what you write isn't easy.

Just discovered Stargate SG-1!! Love Sam and Jacob stories!! This was a really well written and sweet story between father and daughter!! Love how you incorporated tv dialogue with your story, that was great. Hope you write like this!! Will be looking for them! Thanks for sharing your story with us!

that's really good...i love how you incorperated scenes of the show about Sam and her mom's death...it flowed beautifully. Amazing.

not ussaly a person who reads stories that arent s/j but this was great. good chap!

That was beautiful. I don't know what else to say, in a good way.

very nice

Lovely as always. Goes to find another tissue