hahahaha! i loved it! especially the squealing part. lol. you go envy--way to be masculine! great job on the story--it was hilarious! :)

haha cute ^_^

Too cute. I liked this a lot.

Cute. And funny =]

5th paragraph, 2nd sentence, "tellt he> tell the".
13th paragraph, 3rd sentence, "(where> were".
15th paragraph, 3rd sentence, "He opened his,> He opened his mouth,".
16th paragraph, 3rd sentence, "seach>search".
Last paragraph, 1st sentence, "soliders in the roomd> soldiers in the room".

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . AUGH! Now I feel all bad 'n **! Please, please, don't take this as a bad sign! I absolutely loved your fanfic in every way shape and form, its just those 5 things that need fixed! If you want, you can go flame all of my fanfics, just don't feel downgraded in any way. Please, I honestly love it!

Hahah, nice fic. Very funny ;)

Supremely cute. ^/^

lol, that was good. although i am an roy/ed fan, this was just too good. hehehe

That was so cute! omg! (dies) I loved it!

Wow, very cool
funny, sunny and sexy! =p
I think it's the first FMA fic I read, being so behind the series and all, I'm very glad it's this =)
Uh, I think the look in the colonel eyes could have been even more thrilling if it had been a bit more to it ... you know, like, hurt ...

Very cute story! n_n~

its good you should make another chapter

this was totally awesome ^_^ you rock

ahehehehe!
nice nice!
^^

Cute and funny ^^