That was so cute. I loved it. heh. Maybe you could turn this into something more.. I dunno. heh.

I love this story! Thank you for translating it!

Very nice. Thoroughly enjoyable. Well written, and overall very good. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.

great one-shot... hope you make more...

awesome, i loved it.

Hey there!!
This story really rocks I mean I have to admit that becouse there is always one truth^_*
Keep going on writing becouse you are really talented.YOUR WAY IN WRITNG IS REALLY INTRESSTING WHEN I GET STARTED READING I JUST WANT TO CONTINUE ON READING THE WHOLE STORY
Good luck
BEST WISHES!

SARA^_*

Most excellent! The translation issue produces a few gaffs, but they are easily ignored. Very well done.

Cute story. I liked it a lot, but it needed one more read through. I realize the grammer should be bad (it is Ranma speaking) but it places it just doesn't make sence. And there were a few spelling mistakes. Nothing one more read through couldn't fix though.

Good job over all.

wow...that was really interesting and good...i really love it ^^

Very Sweet!

Nice.

Beautiful story, thank you for translating it.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza