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| citeyoursource 2006-09-28 ch 1, | abuseI really liked your story a lot. I thought it had a lot of angst and that you are a really good writer. Good job! |
| Steeldust-01 2005-11-16 ch 6, | abuseAnother great story ! You really are a wonderful writer |
| csiAngel 2005-07-29 ch 6, | abuseThis was a brilliant fic! Such great Mac/Stella scenes; a fab scene when Mac confronts Damon and a beautiful ending :-) Very well-written! |
| wezyjugz 2005-06-07 ch 1, | abuseFantastic story absolutely loved this one. |
| Jackie 2005-05-25 ch 6, anon. | abuseThat was brilliant, I love the whole Mac and Stella thing and you captured it brilliantly. Thanks alot. |
| Alamo Girl 2005-05-24 ch 6, | abuseWOW. I am very impressed. I haven't read much CSI NY fic, but this is the best one so far. Your characterizations are righ on, you language is fluid and emoting. The plot is very emotinonal, and you have Stell and Mac dealing with it true to form. I can truly see Mac and Stella saying and doing the things you have them do, were they to make this an aspect of an episode. I love the line "his hand resting in its familiar spot on the small of her back, softly in unspoken assurance that this hand would never hurt her." That was just brillant, and very true of Mac!! He is a hero, hiding under that reserved, scarred mask. I've often wondered what all he is keeping pushed down and pent up behind lock and key inside... I really loved this story, it was very enjoyable. I hope to read more Mac/Stella or other CSI NY fic from you! Bravo! Alamo Girl |
| Cyclone2 2005-05-23 ch 6, | abuseGreat chapter, great ending, great fic. :) |
| nsc 2005-05-23 ch 6, | abusehey! love the story. thanks for the fast update. i hope you keep on posting stories like this. |
| Tink 2005-05-23 ch 6, anon. | abuseABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT! Please write more stories soon, you my friend ,are a pure genius. ~Lots of Love~ Tink |
| Candice 2005-05-23 ch 6, anon. | abuseIt was still fabulous even though there wasn't as much MacStella as I had hoped...yeah so it was great |
| raingarcia022 2005-05-23 ch 6, | abuseBeautiful ending. Just perfect for the whole story. |
| The Madhatter2 2005-05-22 ch 6, | abuseHey, I loved the ending. Some things in life don't have to end perfectly... and sometimes, a smile solves everything. I love how Mac and Stella play off of each other. Their lasting relationship shows through their reactions to one another. It's beautiful. And you captured it. Lovely piece. I hope to read more from you in the future! :D |
| FriendsHolic 2005-05-22 ch 6, | abuseso beautiful and sweet, yet still a bit sad. |
| breakthehabit 2005-05-22 ch 5, | abuseAw...poor Stella...write faster! |
| Tink 2005-05-21 ch 5, anon. | abuseAW...I LOVED THE CHAPTER. Absolutely my favorite one so far. It's so sad but a great story at the same time because you'll know that Mac will take care of her. Cant wait for the other chapters to come. It's wonderful :D |