Oh I love this - it's one of my dream pairings, but I've always been too cowardly to try it for myself. Thanks for writing this gorgeous little fic.

I thought, what the hell, her writing's good. I'll read it. I see you are a steadfast V/V fan. It's an inevitable couple. But oh my goodness! The bit where Vimes says "I wouldn't want him to detain me" made me so very happy! My friends and I have a joke, or rather a story concept featuring Vimes and Vetinari that will titled "Please Let Me Detain You" because, well, because...just because. But anyhow, you have sex on the mind, my friend! I would write smut too if...if I could...*puts on poor pathetic face*

I have a question. Terry Pratchett or JKR?

Delerious Vetinari?

*stares*

OMG!

Mhm. Very good.

Well written, and everything, too! Positively wonderful.

Dude! So good! First Discworld fic I've read in a long time, but what a way to come back... Brilliant and hot. Totally LOVE your ending!

Oh. My. God. This... wow. Ok, I'm rather unarticulate. I like it. A lot.