This fic perfectly describes Roy Mustang...i completely agree; on the outside he IS perfect, but he keeps his feelings bottled up on the inside. very well descriptive, as usual! keep writing!

exquisite. your take on his personality is on-spot, and your delicate choice of sentence structure flows as smoothly as the lies you place in his wake. visionary piece, my friend, keep up the good work. royai is blessed to have a fan who writes as well as you do.

I like this, it's good to see a new examination of the way people see Roy. To me it seems very much like a prologue, or introduction to a bigger plot, but it's interesting as a one-shot too. Very thoughtful writing.