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| AiEdogawaIsaBellaCullen 2008-05-31 ch 1, | abuseAww!! Ai almost confined in Hakase! This is nice cause she never opens up! Him= CONAN or Gin!?!?! Her= Ran!?!?!?! or Vermouth!>?!?!?!? It doesn't matter... Thanxs! |
| Miyano Ran 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseWow! That story is so deep and sentimental! |
| briana 2005-11-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseokay that was really good i really dont know if i even have already reviewed once but yeah if you can take the time make more like this i love fics about ai-kun and agasa-san p.s. i never seen contact so i lil of it i didt know |
| wayupi 2005-04-18 ch 1, | abuseWow, luv this story. So sweet. Hmmh… looks OOC but not really …confusing… lolz |
| fic revr 2005-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuse"YAY! I'm reading you earlier than I thought! And no, I don't find them OOC. ...Dream? I LOVE dreaming! If only I wasn't such a procrastinator... But Haibara...something tells me that her dream could come true...unlike mine... Oh, well...I could always dream..." Then, in an energetic tone... "Read you later! Mwahahaha!" |
| jack-adam 2005-04-14 ch 1, | abuseCool. Left hanging in the air, over there. Great one-shot, by the way. (Grins) |
| starfruit-22 2005-04-13 ch 1, | abuseit's GOOD ^^ i hope you make another story~! ^^ |
| FS 2005-04-13 ch 1, | abuseSweet. Besides it's not too out of character at all. Agasa is a bit "wiser" than usual, and Haibara is much more confused than she usually is. But it's sweet how Agasa tries to console her. Hm, if you have time to write an one-shot... then the next chapter for Galatea should come soon! :D |
| Chinese-freak 2005-04-13 ch 1, | abuseHeh heh heh... You should know that I like this... Chaos! Entropy! Carl Sagan (he writes good astrophysics books...)! I LIKE IT! Seriously, Ai and the doc do sound OOC, but it's fitting, somehow... But, yeah, good one! ^.^; |
| KaitouKudou 2005-04-13 ch 1, | abuseAwsome, a well known lesson of life, beautifully written into the context of Conan. A very poignant story. Makes me feel all depressed under this hazy overcasted environment I'm in. I give you my 3rd excellence award I've ever given. What do you get? Well...uh...you get your personal satisfaction for the reward lol. Loved it, Great job! Simply Wonderful :) |
| Dagron 2005-04-13 ch 1, | abuseRespond should be response... Rinse should be rince... Just two typos I decided to point at, out of the blue ;c) I've never read the book, and I don't recall whether I've watched the movie or not ^^;; But I'm glad to say it doesn't hinder the comprehension on the whole... Although I do guess it does help if one remembers the storyline, more or less? (bah, humbug. You've put all the necessary hints for the story line of the movie.) I like this ^_^ Agasa is showing insight/wisdom that is generally hidden by his naively cheerful nature. It's quite a change from watching him goof around... and somehow Ai-kun seems more human, especially when he remarks about her still being young. In the series it's sometimes hard to remember that the seventeen/eighteen year olds are just mere teenagers XcD Nice piece -^__^ |