"Members of our movement, of course with their permission," the person replied.

My parents were alive. My parents were alive. And they were free. Free. I couldn't believe it.

This doesn't make sense. With all the abuse this host has. He would never think his parents were free. I myself think he would be horrified regardless of the fact that the Peace movement saved him. He would not at this time understand that his parents are voluntarily allowing yeerks to inhabit them.

I liked it, though it doesn't follow canon. It's still a really good story. I enjoyed it.

Do what happens next! Please?

Aaaawwwwww. That was really good. I was crying and everything. I can't remember, did you say that you WERE making a continuation to this? If not, I would love if you could. Can't wait to read more stories from you!

This is such a good beginning! Please write a sequel! It's funny, suspensful, and a bit sappy all at the same time! My idea of a good story!

Ummm... Intersting. rather a different turn from some of your other works. A bit darker too. Otherwise... ;) ;) Good!;)

Very nice! I liked it a lot. You're a very good writer.

Hmmm...pretty good. Sequel'd be nice

Cool, though a bit confusing at times. You clearly set the characters - Garnas as a real jerk, Tarash a bit bossy (at leats that's the impression I get from her). Write more!

"Anifan1" how on earth did you get my password? You are so in trouble, I am going to tell Xing, you hacker!

Oh your stories are great and you are a great writer. ... i think we could be great friends

I didn't like your story it was awful and you are a bad writer

more more moore needing more please?

Okay, this is a very cool story. It was very well writen. You have a great imagination. I want to see what else happens. (If you're up to it)

TOM IS FREE! WOO-HOO! Any story where Tom has been freed is a good story. Quick paced, and not too much dialogue. I'm happy now :) I WANT MORE!