aww, so sad.

That's really sad and really beautiful. But mostly sad. Still liked it, though.

ohhh my gosh that Was soooo sad! I really liked it

Great story. But don't you think you ought to credit the person who inspired you? I thought you wrote this as a twin story to someone else's originally.

*sniffs, reaches for a box of tissues* That was cool. Sad, but cool!

Oh, how terrible! Please, please don't write a story like this again! It's so depressing.