Hmm, this looks like it could turn into a very interesting story. At least in my opinion. I hope you expand it a bit, as I would like to see what can come of this. :)

wrote a sequel! Pwez! ^__^ I wzant it to be a Nabiki and Ranma ficcy! Good job!

Oh man, I really hope you plan on continuing this as a series! I've never read something so... so... just DAMN good in the Ranma sect of I mean, wow, this was a really good fic, and a perfect beginning for either a mini-story series, or a long one, your choice, but you gotta continue.

I decided to check out your other stories so I went to your profile and gave this one a try. It's AWESOME!

You managed to write an excellent one-shot that it's so deep when you wrote Ranma's dialogue that I can't think of something to say good enough to make this story justice. Having Ranma to talk about his inner thoughts and feelings with Nabiki (no less!), makes it a story I personally wouldn't mind reading over and over again. It's just... well%giving her a chance.

If you don't mind, could you send me some advice about how to write a story? No matter if it's angst, romantic or any other kind (except yaoi and that kind of trash, I'm NOT interested in such kind of garbage). I could use a few pointers, you know.

hell yea i want more of this fan fic. PLAINEST WORDS: I want more chapter(s) to read of this it can go such along way. it has such bueaty.

Well, I typically shy away from "Ranma snaps" stories. They are usually poorly written and show everyone but Ranma in a really bad light. In yours, however, you managed to keep everyone in-character and showed why this relationship can't work without demonizing anybody. Kudos for that! Also, your writing style is very polished, so "good job" there, too. You could write a sequel if you felt like it, but I think this story does a fine job as a stand-alone "one shot". Do whatever you feel like. Well, adios, and (again) good job!

This is pretty good writing. A nice one shot.

totally cool, more please

Nice.
It was a good idea to write all in dialogue, it gives a different feel to the fic. I like how you make Ranma realise that maybe love just isn't enough. I can see this happening. As I'm not a very big fan of Akanes, I'll just aploud your portayel of her. (

I like it.

I think I would like to see you continue this, it's pretty good.

imortis

You have a very insightful Ranma here. Not that I disagree with his analysis, but it's more than I expected from him. And he neglects to mention his own contributions to the problems between himself and Akane, but that is believable human nature. In the end, the only things we can really change is ourselves. ANd you have to admit to your own shortcomings to do that. I hope you have Ranma realize and work on that.

Whoa, at last, another wonderful Ranma/Nabiki centric!

Pros: Might be a nice Ranma/Nabiki matchup if you continue on writing this fic

Cons: I don't like how you end it though. It's TOO open for it to be an ending..., like some of the reviewers say:

"It's great! could you carry on?"

Ja Matte Ne!

P.S.
Im hoping for a next chapter or a sequel of some sort! ANYTHING!

A very good perspective for Ranma. I wish for it to be longer, though. Not the story, but the chapter.

I feel that the story's short chapter fits, so I believe trying to write the next chapters are not very wise. But what I would like to see is a new story, from you preferably, having similar premise. Well, maybe you can rewrite the chapter so that its continuum can be longer.

Well, whatever your choice is, do the thing that will make YOU happy. Only then can you make your reader happy.

"The End"?? No way!! This is GREAT(!), you can´t just "end" it now! Please, if you have the time, continue it? (There´s still lots to write about: peoples reactions, the tricks the Amazones will try to pull, what Nabiki and Ranma plan to do, how Akane reacted, and will this just make Ryoga more mad??... I could continue forever...)

PLEASE UPDATE!

- CrimsonCat.