Oh my... I almost cry when a read that.

Great story. Very well written :)

There is definately not enough of this pairing on here.

This was brilliant. I would have Jack over David anyday. :3

Great job!

Nice story :)

Very good and well written!

hey, its the two leanne's. loud leanne here, I didn't bother reading your work but hey thats me. anyway you

This is so beautiful, so emotional. You've captured the feeling very well! I'm an Snake/EVA shipper too and I almost cried when EVA said in a game "I'm sorry, Snake" Those words are so simple yet so painful. I was hoping someone would write a fic based on that scence. You did and I thank you for that! Thank you!

i loved it

i was gonna do something like that too, but i won't now

great job

I loved this. You clearly have a talent for writing. It's so clear that you don't even notice it while you're reading, if that makes any sense.

There's not enough Snake/EVA things, and this is perfectly lovely. I think you capture her wonderfully, and I love her thoughts about Snake, how she loves him, and the night before. Wonderfully done.

It takes a lot to make me read het, and even more to suspend my dislike of Eva, but you did it. Beautifully written. (Though I think you give her a bit more credit than she deserves. Remember what she says on the WIG? "I told you you could trust me." Bitch.) Anyway, excellent writing.

wow that was awsome good job. That actually sounded like her too. I cant say much more than that was a great story and i enjoyed reading it.

Gorgeous. Brilliant. Beautiful.

Phenomenal writing. Absolutly no room for critics here. That was the best fan fic I have read yet.

Great fic, wish I could do that. Sigh.

Justice Snake is absolutely right- that was a lovely ficlet! Not only was the grammer and spelling perfect, but you can imagine EVA thinking exactly along those lines. I hope to see more fics in the future!