Ha ha! That was a marvalous opening! Absolutely brilliant!

This fits ok enough in the comic section but really should be put in the movie section however don’t move it there because it was put it in my C2 community by my hard working and only staff for my Superior Storm Stories since I think this is one.

I loved this!

hmm. not bad for a first attempt. I'd recommend changing your summary thought, it's not as eye catching as you would probably want to get reviewers. No shame in loving fanfics, it's my life lol. certainly hope this has a sequel,

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