great story

I read the AN in your profile, so I decided to tell you what I think. You're a really good author. But the romance...and developments of the romance...weren't all that, um, steamy. Yeah. They sort of just REALIZED their feelings. I would've liked it better if they discovered it through accidental body contact or something. But I do really like how you portray your characters. Awesome. And again, poor BB.

quite possibly the greatest series of fanfictions I have ever had the priviledge to read. Excellent Character development,intriguing plotlines, great action, a whole host of villians you love to hate, as well as the best pairing of the teen titans universe being central to such an extended story. throw in the knock you out with laughter slapstick moments as well as the imaginative, if a little forced crossovers, and you get an exceptional piece of literature, my commendations to you, inspired author

love love love love it!

Hey started reading your series a week ago, great work. As far as improvements, I'd say I'd like to see more interaction with different characters, like between Starfire and Blackfire, and some of the other characters, you've introduced from other "universes". Speaking of which you've done a great job incorporating them into the story, just be careful not to overdo it, not that you have, but watch out for the fine line of cool, and rediculous, but like I said you've kept it on the side of cool for now. Is anything going to happen with Shift?

Hope you bring in the next section of the story soon. Later:]

I am now completely and utterly disgusted with the pairings. Adios, because I'm not going to finish this story. It's so gross.

What kind of creep makes Raven gay?!! That is sick and wrong!

this review is really 4 chp 15 not 14 so wheres seson five? i got an idea on what u should put and im being serious. u should make them have sex. u know when a couple fights they end up havin "fast" sex well instead of them havin a fight they should just be horny like desire or lust. im tired its like 3 a:m keep on writing seeya

Do you mean it?? after all this time LEGION IS FINNALLY DEAD?!

about friggen time, seriously he's like an overgrown cockroach, just wouldn't die, anyway I am glad that you havent abandoned your series cause there just plain awsome (in fact I think you deserve a mountain of reviews, but I'm afraid I won't be able to supply them..)

that being said my only complaint is that it took you almost a year to write this (we arent getting any younger you know)

now my only question is... who is gonna be the NEXT big villian? (hopefully not trigon himself)

YES I LOVE YOUR WRITING AND YOU BETTER KEEP BLACKFIRE AND RAVEN TOGETHER FOREVER OR ELSE I WILL BE FORCED TO...well...do something, i don't know what! But something, your the first person i have seen use that pairing!! keep it!! can't wait for the new part!

Is it over? (And don't take that offensively, 'cause I like this story.)

how cute!!. xx

Cthulu huh? Liked it a lot!

i love this fic, Keep it up get to the next story fast X-P

reading this story in school, and i love it! first Blackfire/Raven fanfic i have ever read, but a perfect pairing! i haven't managed to finish it yet, but please don't break up rae and blackfire! PLEASE! i would cry so hard! good story so far, keep it up!