 Lady Of The Damned Land 2006-04-04 . chapter 6Finnaly! I finished readin! The last chap was the bomb! All those confessions! Just great! I wonder what'll you think when you look at your revews cus ı submitted like 10 or so... But I read too much fics on this site and it's hard to find more fics which I'd like. I hate fluff and there's a lot around here. |
 Lady Of The Damned Land 2006-04-04 . chapter 5You know what I'm goin to say... Another great chappie. I really like readin suicide things. But I think you should put this fic under the angst genre. |
 Lady Of The Damned Land 2006-04-04 . chapter 4There's nothin to say just another great chap from you! |
 Lady Of The Damned Land 2006-04-04 . chapter 3Uhh! You wrote it well but I just don't like Tyson musings but I guess it's the concept all of'em are confessin somthin sad. So go on! |
 Lady Of The Damned Land 2006-04-04 . chapter 2A really good chap! I'm really wonderin what ı will face with in the next chap. |
 Lady Of The Damned Land 2006-04-04 . chapter 1I.Certainly.Liked.It. I wish ı could write like that.Poor Kai. C ya! |
 PrincessBrittany 2005-10-04 . chapter 6Hi,
That was a good story, and it is good to be true to yourself.
Peace,
Amanda |
 waterlily 2005-09-17 . chapter 6 i'm thinking now that maybe it would've been better if you just left it at 4 chapters. these two new ones feel rushed. no offence or anything but they just feel like that, or maybe it's just me... and they seem a bit OOC. i mean it's strange how they sudenly blurt it all out like that when they had years to practise keeping it all in. i know they would have to break down eventually, but just not all at once like this.
this is the first time i've actually criticised a fic... hm... anyway good luck with your other fics! (and assignments, h/w, etc...) |
 Jani Rieme 2005-09-16 . chapter 6I thought a day was twenty-four hours long. o.O And when are you gonna read ALL of my stories?! That's what I try to do with you! And yes, you are a lazy bum. Fix it. |
 CucumberPickles 2005-09-15 . chapter 6Well... I guess that was okay...
I'm sorry to state this but I was slightly disappointed in this chapter. It seemed like you rushed the chapter making everyone just spill like that... I mean, I think it's good where they all consult each other after they found out about Ray but... I still say it was rushed... |
 lil' angelgrl 2005-09-14 . chapter 6PLEAZ UPDATE SOON! Well that is if you’re gonna update anymore! Well anyways I’m glad that they all got it out and now they know! |
 RkR 2005-09-14 . chapter 6That was great...I luv it! Sad too...but it was great!^^) GREAT JOB ON EVERYTHING! I wish I had read this earlier, maybe I could've reviewed on all chaps.
Great work though! |
 manga-ghost 2005-09-14 . chapter 6Heh heh, I liked the long uncomfortable silence bit. ^_^
Was v. funny! And I loved the way Kai had a little outburst and all, I'm really really pleased that you carried on with it cause this was a really great way to end it! (looks at what she's written) Wow, that's the longest thing I've ever written in a review!
Keep writing great stories, you're AMAZING! at what you do.
Cyas! |
 Jani Rieme 2005-09-10 . chapter 5Jeez...not quite what I had in mind...they're still gonna need to call the hospital about blood loss, Rei really needs medical attention if he's going dizzy from blood loss. |
 CucumberPickles 2005-09-10 . chapter 5Well, this makes sense. Not that the other stuff didn't make any sense. It's just that the other stuff was a bit, erm, weird coming from those characters. However, you seemed to have been able to figure out Ray really nice in this one. It makes sense, like I said before.
sorry for just keep on repeating the same thing. It's just that I don't have much to write(plus, I'm in a big hurry). Sorry if I can't make this review as long as the others...
Anyways, about the e-mail that you sent me... I guess pride could be what's making me fear, but I wouldn't say that pride is the only thing. I don't really care what people do to me, it's just that I'm afraid that those people will be affected themselves in some way because of my sudden change.
And, well, not that much people that I meet face-to-face know that I put stuff on at fanfiction, either. And I guess that people can be really good actors as well. But I still say that they have to know and experience that emotion first before being able to express it.
Sorry for going against everything that you said. My reviews probably aren't that much of a help. They probably just bore you. I'm sorry about that.
So... Update the next chapter(why was this one so short?) and I'll review an even longer one! (Oh, I have no degree in phsychology.) |