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| linder 2005-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this but can't help hoping that you'll continue somehow. I'd love to see how you'd resolve all that angst. |
| Laura-trekkie 2005-04-15 ch 1,  | abuseO, nice angst. It's difficult to know who's side I want to be on here (not that I *need* to take sides), it seems as if they both did wrong. Though maybe Danny did worse by punching Martin. The Sam angle is interesting too. I like Danny's conflicting feelings about her- she's like a sister, but she's using Martin to get at Jack. It's a dilemma. And what's Martin's plan here? Is he just caught up in Sam's scheme, or is he trying to use her to get to Danny, or does he just like her? Interesting. |
| Tracy 2005-04-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou know, I'm really not a big fan of slashfic, but I quite enjoyed this one. Had a lot of believable character in it. Nice writing - you write more and I'll read it! |