This certainly is an interesting beginning. Please continue if and when you have the inclination, it would be a pity to let this idea go to waste. : )

go go go
update, update..
this is odd
but please make this a bit neji x genma or anyone

its good I heart odd pairings!

all write all ready: who are you to tell the author what she should write? if she wrote tonton and naruto i would read it because i have that option...shikamaru/shino sounds interesting...

Whoa. The second I saw the summary, I have to admit I was in "WTF" mode. It sounded intriguing, so I had to take a look. Continue, if you will. (please please)

i like the mood of this story. i'm glad you put chojis death in, not that i want him to die, but putting a depressing situation in made it have a theme? yeah sort of..
"You know," Genma began, "that kid didn't even know he'd died."

"It's better that way," Hiashi said.

yeah I thought that part was bittersweet and ndo nod nod nod i liek i like

Hey, I like your novel so much//
And I also want you countinue this novel.
It's the first time that I read HijaXGen novel.
Please do not quit it>_

Well, there was this part in the 3rd part of the Chuunin exam where Genma glanced up at Hiashi...

Unexpected pairing, but ... so what?

You're making it work. It's a good thing. Please do keep sharing. Het or Slash doesn't matter to me as much as a nicely written, intriguing fic, and I'm anxious to see how this plays out as well as refreshed by the new pairing ^_^

You should continue since it seems like a promising fic. Also I think its great that you picked such a unique pairing. Forget the flamers since they suck and shouldn't review if they aren't going to have constructive ciritisms.

i dont like yaoi and dont read it but when i saw your pairing i was like NANI!? i was dude this pairing totally came out of left field just wanted to give you the heads up on what i thought. whats next naruto paired up with ton ton in a friendship fic?

Wow, I've definitely never seen this pairing done. I love the way you portray Genma with such a casual, bachelor air. And I can't wait to see how you flesh out Hiashi's character some more. They don't go nearly in depth enough in the anime, imho, thought I don't know about the manga. Nice job, keep going!