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| Doray 2007-08-15 ch 4, | abuseHello! This chapter is nice, the emotion of the characters are portrayed well. Reading it feels like seeing the "movie clips" in the course of a playstation game. ^_^ |
| Lyless and lockesilver 2006-08-25 ch 2, | abuseIt's funny and I like it I hope your continueing with it Even though it's been a year. |
| Doray 2005-08-11 ch 3, | abuseHi! Okay, it's me again. I guess now you aren't too thrilled. Anyway, don't feel bad if you're not getting any reviews. It's normal because FTTD is no longer on air. Try publishing original stuff at In that site, you'll get reviews within minutes after you post. I'm telling you that from experience. ^_~ I liked the descriptions in this chapter, although I got a bit confused about the characters' identities. But I'm sure you'll explain everybody's role in the story later. Update soon! ^_^ ~Doray |
| Doray 2005-05-14 ch 2, | abuseYeah, the part where it was revealed that Simba was as clumsy as Merlock got me laughing! I'll always be here to review you! P.S. Have you read my new chapters already? Thanks. |