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hetafan 7/24/11 . chapter 1
Beautiful! Loved it!
MikoSwordmaiden01 10/1/09 . chapter 1
Out of all the Sorata/Arashi fanfics I have read...this one is probably one of THE most romantic and well thought up ones that I've read.

I LOVE that you keep them both in character so well, I could EASILY picture the whole story in my head as I read it. You did an AMAZING JOB!

I know that this story was published a long time ago...but I would ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT if you continued to write more Sorata/Arashi fics in the future! You have a wonderful gift and THANK YOU SO MUCH for sharing your story! It is now one of my FAVORITES!
drinktea 11/28/04 . chapter 1
Ohmygoodnes that left me breathless. *inhales* This is THE best Sorata/Arashi ficlet I've ever read! Hurrah! The characterizations are perfect and all the things that happened to her [the hoarseness of her voice for example] struck me as very believable for the context it was in. And I have to say that the theme is really what made it worth reading; the idea of forever. It was just so gripping, but you didn't overdo it.

A definite favourite. Keep writing, I'll be mad if you don't! *tries to look threatening*

- Sakura
D-Channerz 11/2/04 . chapter 1
Very sweet, and beautifully written. Excellent piece.
marbles 10/2/04 . chapter 1
i love it! _ really good! i absolutely adore sorata/arashi pairing! write more, 'kay?
Kaka-C 9/26/04 . chapter 1
I don't even WATCH X, I don't know the characters except that they pop up randomly in Tsubasa, and just that SnoOza made me read this fic _ which was really good! The extended metaphor about the starlight and the transience of life and forever-ness... oh whatever, I can't really write good reviews. The fic was excellent.
SnoOza 9/26/04 . chapter 1
You know what, I really don't know what to say, because if I do I'll end up gushing for hours about how much I just LOVE this story. Seriously, it's one of the best romance fics I've read around. Okay, I'll try to get down to write a coherent review. Let's see, I love the theme of 'forever' the story pivots on. You developed it so beautifully as well, managing to intersperse it throughout the fic yet without overloading the reader. And the characterisation was flawless, and you really brought out Arashi as a character through the use of first-person. There're other great motifs like the real and artificial starlight and how it's linked back to the theme. That was very adroitly done.

There were some slight hitches in the fic, like using 'Sora' instead of 'Sorata' (rather jarring, considering the atmosphere) at one point, and saying that Sorata had a boyish frame (you have to be kidding me, he's big and hulking - in a good clampish way). Other than that, however, I have nothing but praises for this fic. And I really, really love the way the fic led up to the last line. Just, well, beautiful. I felt like crying. Wah. A wonderful, wonderful fic.
Solaria735 8/11/04 . chapter 1
I thought it was sweet. :-D
was-p.s.y.r.k 2/8/03 . chapter 1
nice .

loved it!
ame 12/21/01 . chapter 1
You've just gotten me hooked on Sorata/Arashi! I don't even know anything about the series, but already I'm convinced they're meant to be together forever. Great story, very touching. :)
ChibiRaihaHK 12/3/01 . chapter 1
LOVED IT!
KC Selby 7/15/01 . chapter 1
Awwwwwwwww... that's so sweet... But what, you're saying that this isn't depressing, sad and morbid? Well, it's dark, anyway. I like it. Moooorrrrreeeeee! I want mooorrrrree!
Christine 6/20/01 . chapter 1
Hm...interesting story topic...very well written, portrays the characters with flavour. I think maybe the word forever wore itself out after a while though; a tad too repetetive. But otherwise, nice!
Sailor Ghost 6/13/01 . chapter 1
*cries* THAT IS ONE OF THE MOST TOUCHING, BEAUTIFUL AxS FICS IVE EVER READ! I wish mine will turn out at least half as good as yours did!
Tsukiori-chan 5/12/01 . chapter 1
It was a great story. It was one of the few fanfics to make me cry.
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