okay i found this story in the web and was so thrilled when i saw you posted it on . love the story, though you are right, you have improved your writing skills a lot. the 2 chapters you re-write were a thousand times better then before. im kinda sad you dont update. did a great job, thanks for the part-time-entertaining.

so far wermops

Is this the end of the story? E-mail me please

it got really confusing after ch 14..

but other thn that I like it.!

You just made me crack up and laugh aloud at prof Dumbledore's introduction. Professor HumbleWhore, hilarious!

great story!!

That was good. Keep up the good work and please update again soon.

I like your story so far, but the premise of Buffy being Hermione, but Hermione was part of the Trio and disappeared in 4th year is confusing as heck.

I have to say, I was enjoying the original story, and then you up and rewrote it, and guess what? The new story is even better!

I'm hooked!

heyy..another amazing chapter. theres not much i can say about it. I love how this chapter was all about Dawn. You've made her mature but at the same time she is still acting her age and doing reckless stuff. also love the mentions and subtle influence of everyones fav. vampire. can't wait to read more.
Eden's Echo

Do you know, I read through the first 13 chapters before coming to the A/N, then I read that, went to the next chapter and presto! There's a brand new story. I was slightly annoyed...
But really, although the first story was good, I think the rewrite is far better; the style of writing and the way it just seems to flow a lot better, so I just have to say, great story and hope to read the next chapter soon :)

Again, I review. I found this in your Livejournal through a crossover news post, and reviewed it as tigerpetals. I loved the combination of angst and humor, and how you've done the characterization. The one problem I have is that you've posted the rewritten chapters in the same place as the original. You might want to fix that. It's excellent though, and I can't wait to read more.

It's a very nice new story and all, but.. that's what it is.

Whether it's brand spankin' new (as opposed to the first 13 chapters) or a rewrite of them, you can't post these last two chapters like this.

If it's new, you have to post by itself, as a new fic.

If it's a rewrite, you can either post it by itself (which most people do), or delete the old fic chapter by chapter replacing them with new chapters as you go.

What you CAN'T do is START OVER in the MIDDLE of the fic like this. It's not only really bad ettiquette, it's against FFNet's regs.

That being said.. the new chapters lack the warm goodness that the first ones have. It's like they're... missing their heart.

Great writing style, good grammar, and formatting is excellent. They just don't... grab. The only thing really notable about them is thet fact that they're posted so inappropriately.

I was enjoying the original fic, then FWUMPH! I ran smack dab into another fic that I didn't recognize. Very jarring and abrubt.

"sorry, but no review replies here, but I will be replying to them in the next chapter"

Just so you know, you're going to have to remove all review replies. It's a fic-deletion violation of FFNet's rules.

GREAT story. Love the fact that Buffmione isn't immediately happy-happy to see Harry and company. I like seeing the good guys suffer just a bit.

this is a great story! this chapter rox!

Oh, I love this story! I am going to read the rest of this right away!