Great story! One of the few fanfics I read all the way to the end...I saw the pic of Cho you had in mind. She's quite a sexy version, but I'm sticking to my younger Zhang Ziyi image in my mind. It makes the fighting scenes easier for me to imagine. Sweet ending! :

Awww... That was so sweet. Lindsay was rather frightening, I must say.

the best

Please get your oriental weapons right! Katana'a are not Chinese, and neither are ninjas!

Excellent story - best Cho fic I've seen. I like the way you tie in Chinese martial arts/Crouching Tiger Hidden Dragon to round off her character. The bit where Harry complains about the proverbs and other incomprehensible interests is so spot on - she's all the better for not being too perfect. Cute rule about kissing - "you may now kiss the bride".

i read read your story thought that it was great.

keep up the great work.

In the previous review, Geno pointed out several silly ideas of mine; those are the very reasons why I'm writing another (better thought-out) fifth year story. Most of the weirdness was due to laziness, but some of it was due to just thinking the ideas were cool at the time. Of course, there has to several better ways to make Cho interesting and plenty of ways to make Draco begin to help the good guys. I'll work on it for my newer fifth year story!

I rather like this fic. But the fact that ninjas go to hogwarts is quite unbelieveable. I dont like either, that the death eaters just go right on in and invade hogwarts. Draco was WAY out of charactor. HE EOULD NEVER CALL HARRY "HARRY" HE ALWAYS CALLED HIM "POTTER"

It was ok though

Three Stars

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Cool story.Harry and Cho make a cool couple.Cho was awsome.Little Miss Cho's cool!

I looooooooooooooooooved it.H/C make an awsome couple.Cho was soooo dang cool.

Um, the previous review points out ANOTHER HUGE MISTAKE! I combined several little scenes to make R of P, so that caused all of the inconsistencies. At first, Cho's parents did not die, but in the end I decided to make the story more dramatic by killing off Cho's parents. (Sorry Cho!) I didn't have a beta-reader for R of P, as you can now tell!

Hey Pottermaniac. In an earlier chapter, you killed off Cho's parents. Now they have recovered? Which one is the mistake?

wow. what was the cure?

funny. ha dudley!

that's sad but she DID bring it on herself.