great story!! I hope you add more soon!

cool story

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Very nice i really liked it. The detective was really good. thx

Really, really beautiful and lovely!

Whoo, like her present to him!! Coolness!!

really like House's replies to the police and that you had each of them telling there stories back to back, like theending and thgat each time she says thank you it means something different.

I like the Tivo line and the coffee part, and the not making eye contact, like the whole conversation. Double thumbs up!!

I really like this chap alot!! I like the touching and the concen compssion and tenderness!! This is super!!

Brilliant! Loved it...

update soon please

Oh, please continue! I'm really enjoying it.

I feel bad, I've read your story many times but obviously that was in the dark days before I respected the review button. Just wanted to tell ya that i LOVED this story and think you are a great author!

loved it

Excellent story! I love how you took a bad situation and turned it into a really great story that keeps the reader practically glued to the screen. I would love to read more of these two. Please update soon, thanks.