good.

I have a couple things i would like to say about your story's.
First off you are a good writer but the problem is you take to long to get to a point and often leave the story unfinished or incomplete. At the end of the story i am often scratching my head trying to figure out what just happened.I know you don't want to be a writer but if you are going to post something up for someones enjoyment you need to follow through to the finish.

Keep Trying I have Faith you eventually will figure it out with practice you will get it.

Aw nice ending.

I am Loving these stories...please update soon!!

Hold on a moment, Vader killed the Emperor right? Obi-wan is still around as well? Training Ryoo, hmm...

About your wedding?" asked Amidala. "Leia, you made a deal with Vader and I. We gave you a month - more than that - to pick someone to marry, and you didn't. You know that we could have gotten any boy that you wanted."

Aww. How sweet, they gave her more that a month to find someone to marry. Look how caring they are.

Mara's baby... dead, but h0ow? HOW? HOW! Kill them Luke, hahahahaha! Kill them all, well not really I am just kind of getting caried away. Anyways its about time Anakin tries to kill the Emperor! God he waited nineteen and a half years!

update!

Come to the dark side, Pooja... bwahahahahahaha

Interesting update

update soon!

Great chapter and update soon! I'm glad that Pooja and Leia are spending some time together.-(Erin)J.E.A.R.K.Potter

yay you updated! update again soon!

I don't like Rafael, but still I think that he and Pooja would go well together. Great job and update soon!-(Erin)J.E.A.R.K.Potter

kinda looks like a soap opera.

Wonderful