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| KeikoHayasaka 2008-07-06 ch 7, | abuseaw!p.s.ur last name isn't englaman...is it? |
| KeikoHayasaka 2008-07-06 ch 6, | abuseheart arrow?wow... |
| KeikoHayasaka 2008-07-06 ch 5, | abuseAH!RIN IS SO CUTE! |
| KeikoHayasaka 2008-07-06 ch 4, | abusei hope the thing following them isn't sesshomaru... |
| KeikoHayasaka 2008-07-06 ch 3, | abusei wanna go there! |
| KeikoHayasaka 2008-07-06 ch 2, | abuselittle kiddy, ithink the unicorn should have a jappanesse name like dainichi(first sunrise(of new year))but and english name is good to...i like the story!:) |
| KeikoHayasaka 2008-07-06 ch 1, | abusewow,if i read this when u first wrote it i wouldv'e killed myself!I LUV IT! |
| Lady Kagewaki 2005-07-06 ch 7, | abuseOMG! I LOVED THE ENDING! I really liked how Rin got all snuggly! That was SO cute! Adorable! |
| Lady Kagewaki 2005-07-06 ch 6, | abuseAWE! Heart Arrow! That's so SWEET! I'm loving this. |
| Lady Kagewaki 2005-07-06 ch 5, | abuseAH! Lightning is a brave unicorn. This is good story. It's very imaginative and creative. (I'm still worried about Ah-Uhn, though!) |
| Lady Kagewaki 2005-07-06 ch 4, | abuseOh! What's following them! Lord Sesshomaru would fit right in such a beautiful landscape, though I doubt he could enter the valley. Sigh. |
| Lady Kagewaki 2005-07-06 ch 3, | abuseGreat descriptions. What about Ah-Uhn! I'm worried about our two headed dragon friend. |
| Lady Kagewaki 2005-07-06 ch 2, | abuseAwe. I think Rin's the only thing on the planet that could hear a unicorn speak. She's just so sweet! I like the name for the unicorn also. Good job. |
| Lady Kagewaki 2005-07-06 ch 1, | abuseOMG! AH-UHN! Poor Ah-Uhn, so under appreciated. White blob? Hm...I must know! On to the next chapter. |
| Demon Rin 2005-05-14 ch 7, | abuseThat was awesome I really loves it |