Hey, great story. I know you decided not to keep it up but I really hope you'll change your mind. You're a great author so keep up the great work.

TC

Kaho *Mizuki* is the name, I think. But you wrote her well enough. She's the same self-serving woman that we all know. But I suppose she'll strike up a friendship with our annoying sorceror... Will there be KuroganexFai here? I sense a little foreshadowing. They're so natural together.

The key that Kaho presented to Sakura was also a good curveball. I didn't expect that! It was very good.

Ah, here's Watanuki. I was wondering when xHolic was going to make an appearance. Wonderful job on the introduction. Yuuko as an agent for change was an interesting plot twist. All of the characters are themselves. Great work!

It's an interesting start. I was quite surprised to see Clow Reed talking to Touya Kinomoto. The story sounds dark and ominous. I can't wait to read more.

Wow. I'm really impressed by the scope of this story. The way you've combined, and changed, so many different characters and storylines... I love it. I really do. I guess you're not updating very often, but it seems like you've been at this for a long time, so I have hope that it'll be finished soon.

I've also been enjoying a lot of your shorter works about Clow on your livejournal. What fun! You write him as a truly delightful character.

Wow, this IS an exceptionally good AU (was linked here from a list of AU recs on LJ's clamprecs)! You do a good job of blending the magical with the technological elements, the sweetness of Card Captor Sakura with the mystery and tragedy of XHolic and Tsubasa, and the canon characterizations with the unique circumstances of the AU. It was particularly impressive that you managed to find a good middle ground between CCS!Shaoran and Tsubasa!Shaoran. I know you have not updated this story in several months, but if you have any interest at all in finishing it, I can tell you that there is at least one person out there with an interest in reading the rest. Being a KuroFai fangirl, I'm exceptionally curious about what their fates are, but you make all of the characters so sympathetic that any addition to the story would be welcome. Thanks for posting this!

oh, yuukoxclow... sigh... a love for all time.

i wonder who he's giving it to. if he was following the distorted timeline of that which is clamp, he'd give it to some variation of eriol...

this could completely be an alternate world for clamp (i don't think there's such a think as an au in the clamp world)

Ack, squee! This story is so amazing! I love everything that you've done, especially the details pertaining to Clow. You've made me really feel for his character in a way that I'd never thought possible.

*gasps* wah! why did clow have to die? nice cliffhanger by the way...

Eriol's in this to?

wow...eriol...I didn't think he would come up in the story. I don't think Clow saw it coming either XD

Poor Yue, I hope that what he finds doesnt scar him, much.

Now I am thinking if something happened to Fujitaka? Albeit, he seems to know some things that are going on, but if Eriol is here...XD

And here I thought Clow had died last chapter XD

Beautiful scene with Yuuko and Clow by the way, especially the kiss. It was soo bittersweet T_T

I am loving Watanuki's relationship with him, too bad he will die in next chapter. I wonder if Kero and Yue will know that their master died.

Fei Wang Reed is the r00t of all evil!

That was so sad, is Clow going to die? I love the way your writing this, its done really well. I so sad at the start when Touya died. Please update soon!

Is Clow dead? For real kind?