This flowed almost like a song when I read it, which I really liked. And the repetition of some of the phrases like "give yourself to the night" worked really well in giving it that flow. I'm a sucker for pretty poems, and this one is definitely pretty. :)

Wow...that is beautiful. oo;

Wow, that was one of the greatest poems ever. I'll probably read it like 50 times. I love the Phantom of the opera

Very nice! I like it!
"A mask that masks just half a soul
A rose of deepest blood..."

OMG! I like the rose... Very, very nice... I hate using the word 'nice' because it was better than that, but I can't seem to find a better word for it right now...
Good job!

Angel of the Opera
(Ellie)

I *LOVED* it. I saw Phantom on Broadway a week ago, and I loved it. Your poem is...breathtaking. I'm not a expert critic, but I really loved it. Truly. Deeply. Darkly. ^_^

Charlie Quill

Ah, the Phantom. Gotta love him.