This is so awesome! I love Etsu, she is amazing, I wonder what she is planning.

This was absolutely wonderful, I really wish I could read on!! I understand you had it on your LJ, but I went and everything was locked-- not to mention hard to navigate. Please, please, please!! For the sake of your readers here on humble old post the rest of the parts-- it doesn't have to be on a schedule or anything, as long as it's continued to be put up here. :) It would take only a minute of your time to update it all, so please consider your fans here and put up what you can of this wonderful story.

I really enjoyed reading this story thank you for putting out your ideas. The only complaint I have is that the story seems extremely drawn out, but that is just me. I get a little annoyed when good stories take a while to get exciting haha. Anyway, I think you created an exellent personality for admiral Zhao in the occuring events. Good Job!

This is quite intriguing. I love the themes of politics and gender roles. I wish you would finish it

Fave! Where are you? PLease update soon!!

I swear to god...UPDATE! GAH! Please?

hey, this story is so god! you did a FABULOUS job making it!
I love it!


Abbie

pLease update!i wnat to know what happens!!

Why haven't you continued? I want to findthe secret... the outcome... everything! I really like the way you have set this story, you can actually believe that it's in the Fire Nation - it's so realistic! And Zhao as a prostitute's bastard son... well, suits him, that's all I can say.

this is an interesting sideplot, I like the plot development.

PLEASE! PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPTER I AM DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS. THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY AND IT CAUGHT MY EYE WHEN I READ THE PREVIEW. I AM REALLY IMPRESSED BY THIS STORY. I RAELLY CAN'T GIVE YOU ANY POINYER BECAUSE THIS STORY IS EXECELLENT. PUT THE NEXT CHAPTER ON!

i REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY SO COULD YO KINDA HURRY MUP AND PUT THE NEXT CHAPTER ON. please! I'M DYING TO KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN TO etSU! i REALLY wANT TO KNOW!

whoops! nevermind about the paragrpah thing... i think my eyes are being burned out by the glare of the computer. my fault entirely

i've only read a chapter and a half and i can say without a doubt that this is the best zuko/oc fic i've read. Etsu isn't a Sue and she seems to be a likable character. there is good detail and the paragrpahs aren't too long. I have one suggestion though; everytime a new person speaks, star a new paragrapgh. its a lot easier on the eyes.

Well.
It's a refreshing releif to see a Zuko/OC romance done correctly - in a style not only elegant but beleivable and realistic. I'd love to see more at some point in the future.
I know you're busy with RL - a curse upon its name! - but there's always time for the little things. Please, try and update this sometime soon. Or if you can't, at least tell us devoted readers if you're killing the story so we can properly grive. It doesn't seem fair to leave usin the agony of suspense!