This is so amazing- I read this story once, loved it and then promptly forgot what site I'd found it on! This hits every button, I tell you, all that I could possibly want in a story so I thought I'd chip in with my praise: Great work!

Awww..Love the ending.hehehe.keep it up!

I really loved this story! Can't wait to read the sequel!

Avalon (the author) here. To answer Skyerocket's question, Linda Campbell beta reads all my stories, including "Eidolon" and "The Wraith" (the other story to which Skyerocket is referring). I wrote "Eidolon" first, which is why there's no mention that it's a rewrite (because it isn't - it's the original). "The Wraith" was written much later and states clearly in the introduction that it is a rewrite (which is also why I haven't posted it here). All clear now?

And thanks to everyone for the reviews!

I've read this story before... Only the parts were switched with Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon Jinn from Star Wars. It was written by Linda Campbell, who you mention... does she know you're using her story? Or did you write it a long time ago and use Campbell's name?

Absolutely brilliant, i can't wait to read the sequel. Janeway was written beautifully, i don't think the writers could've come up with a better episode! I thoroughly encourage you to write more!

I LOVE THIS STORY! I know I'm reviewing the first chapter but I've already read it bfore. This is going straight into my favourite story list.

very good.