love it...cannot wait to read more...

omg, I just finished reading the original on AFF about five minute ago, and I almost died when I thought you were ending it. But I'm so happy that you're going on with the story- the first one was amazing and I'm so excited to see what you'll do with your edited version!

"If pressed he would have to guess that the boy in his shyness was holding the king at bay and out of fear or scaring their guest off he was giving him whatever birth he needed."

It's 'berth', not 'birth'.

Birth: beginning, parentage, ancestry, line, blood, family, race; start, commencement, inception, genesis; launching, inauguration.

Berth:give a wide berth to, to shun; remain discreetly away from.

Great story though.

CLIFFHANGER!

so they skipped the 3 dates rule and went straight to the sex n.n
Bad, bad Jareth!

now we know
but the thing is poor Toby has just begun his adventure, ain't he?

how sweet!
now I want a big sister who's just like Sarah

Oh no, Sarah will FREAK when she sees the drawing :)

i am really loving it
never heard of labyrinth slash before
...but its good!

Hiya! I have been reading this story all afternoon, and I truly enjoy your version. Now that I have reached chapter 13, however, it seems to have been forgotten. Do you intend to finish this story? I do hope so.

Oh! I found you!
*clicks favourite story add button*
I read this a long time ago when it was only about 8 chapters long! & then I couldn't find it for such a long time!
I love this story so much, it's perfect, hurry and update, they need to resolve this sexual tension son!
^_^

This chapter was quite enjoyable. I do really like the change you did in the middle there. Tobias getting alittle drunk is actually pretty funny.

I have been reading this fanfiction on for the past two days, and was alittle erked about the last chapter. It just cut off, and then I was told the Author gave up. At first I was really at a loss of what to think, "These beautiful lines have been rewriten? What? No. I want the original story of the way this woman thought. Her mind made me think, crave, love everything about the Labyrinth more than I have ever had."
I was being biased, and really picky about chapter 20 on ADFF. I finally followed the link and began to read through the pages. I do enjoy the way you have rewriten it. I am not in the slightest disappointed about this change. I am actually very glad that you did rewrite it, it flows all the more and seems to have its same capture that it had before.

Thank you. This story is absolutely lovely, and has to be my favorite fanfiction in a long time.

I don't care if I've already offically given up yaoi! I loved this story when I did like yaoi, and now that you've reposted it I must keep reading till you're finished. Call me a hypocrite, I don't care. I just love this story, and it's so well-written. You rock!

Please write more! I love this fic so much! I hope you're still writing it! I love all the characters and you build up tension and suspense so well!