Magnificent story!

Excellent work here, well done ! The only thing that bugs me is how she falls into the trap at Pemberley: the excellent professional that she is would have been warier... but I can see how important it is to the story. This was my second read and I liked it just as much as the first time, particularly the complex relationships amongst all the government operatives. More please :-)

Quite honestly, this is the BEST fanfiction i have ever read. Your writing is a God-given talent. Absolutely loved this story. This story was a breath of fresh air from the usual pride and prejudice fanfiction. Absolutely remarkable! wow! :D

So very unconventional, but lovely all the same. I love the way you have deviated from the standard format of a Pride and Prejudice fanfiction, and I have greatly enjoyed the portrait you have painted using your imaginative characters, and the heart-stopping plot twists and turns.

I blame you for a sleepless night, and sleeping at 2AM.

Cheers,
and happy fanficcing!

that was wonderful!! amazing story and plot! update soon please


HawkAngel

oh my gosh! amazing story, so intense,by far the best story i've read on fanfiction. I love how you merged both p&p and spy thriller together. you've got so much talent. thank you for the wonderful read.

WOW.


Just incredible. Though it's not Pride and Prejudice in the sense of the basic plot line, you have stayed true to the personalities of our most beloved characters. I love the Petra Villinova/Charlotte connection - very clever.

And I ADORE the ending. Like any good novel, you have left your reader realing, grasping, needing, demanding something more, something to fufill the loss that has arisen out of the fact that there are no more words to read. But by no means should you attempt to write a sequel - finishing a good story is equal parts aggony and exstacy.

Finally, I am a lover of adapted screenplays, and of all the fanfiction I have read, I feel this story is by far the most well suited for the cinema. It is not everyday the movies portray a female character of infalliable strength, such as your Elizabeth Bennet, yet a character who is also more than just a sex icon. Elizabeth's action sequences could be compared to the likes of Catwoman (a rather trashy super hero movie from the early 20's) but Elizabeth's character is so much deeper. She is strong, intelligent, witty, funny, steely, and emotional. And her internal battle of duty versus love is so compelling. I would love to see this story come to life, and I really truly mean that.

Well, I have ranted far longer than I intended, but this is such a gorgeous story. It deserves it. Kudos.

~Marivan

Love your story! Absolutely amazing. Most of the stories I've read about gangs, espionage, or secret angents didn't go into much detail such as yours. Most of them just stated that she was a secret agent, but you actually went ten up over them and talked about capitalist and socialst politics (etc) and actually gave plausible reasons.
It was a very...emotional read =D; and awesome spin on PP. Great job (although it sucks for Darcy to be declared dead, but realistic)!

Aww. He chooses love. :D I was ready to expect they won't end of together, like one other story that I read, when Elizabeth dies. Well enough about that sad information not regarding to your fabulous fanfic. This story has become one of my favorites because of its uniqueness of story line [most stories I have read just follow the basic story line of P&P, but you crafted it in an unbelievable way.] I hope that your future projects turn out as fabulous as this one did. :D

Dani

I love your story! It's just so awesome!

awesome story

Just wanted to say that this is one of my favorite Pride and Prejudice fanfics!

i really liked this story, it was quite good for fanfic, i loved it really, but i knew all through that wickham was the bad guy and that georgie was alive, but maybe write an after story of what happens after he chose love

awesome story

this was so sweet i really liked it , and i loved how kick ** lizzy was