And indeed that's what he became: little more than Sidious's slave, to use and abuse :(

This is excellent. You've done well.

Another good SW fanfic that should be made into a small clip of a show...if GL let's it, but how many GL workers read fanfic. Anyway very good perspective from DV, see ya round. Oh, and for the fanfic A New Destiny, which I forgot to add to review-That fanfic SHOULD be made into a movie or inthinities comic book for Episode I...Too bad you can't ask them, I mean you can, but how likely are you going to get a fanfic published into a comic book...very slim...or none...(just a thought) "Well misa gotta gosa nowsa, beya checking on yousa in and outsa...mesa a SW fan also, butsa not starting at 3rd gradesa, at KG/elementry" (kinda memerrized 4-6 back then, and now I already memerized 1-3)Well, see ya round, hope you make another really excallent SW fanfic. Bye!

-Sky66 out

ps-I'm making my own fanfic, but can't get summury, WOULD ask you but, folks really strict about internet.

pss-CAN'T DO THE E-MAIL THING ONLY REWIEW B/C OF FOLKS.

BYE!

-NOW Sky66 out

That was beautifully done. You've brought out the hubris in him that most people probably feel at some point in time -- the hubris of being special, of being good at something. Your Anakin reads a little less like the spoiled child of the movies and more like someone who's motives, while not good, are at least understandable. I like the symmetry of beginning a slave and ending a slave -- nice insight.

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Omg, that was amazing. I just happened to have my Revenge of the Sith soundtrack playing at the moment and conveniently, the song that was playing was "Anakin's Dark Deeds." Lol, how perfect. Great story. Good job!

Wauw .This is one of the best SW fanfics I have ever read . It describes Darth Vader as a human being not as a mindless murderer . I actually start to feel sorry for him .
i know one thing for sure : if your Star Wars novel comes out ,I'm defenitely going to buy it .

sophia solo
21/04/2005

Great story! It's so realistic! Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep upt the great work

Natalie

That was great and it's so true too. Please write more! :D

This is a great insight into Anakin's mind. I love it, but then you already know that. I put this one on my favorite story's list. You must do more.