This is so great! Please add more to this :D I mean, you've got 48 renews for 2 chapters! That's incredible! So obviously, that means I'm not the only one eagerly anticipating the next chapter :D lol

Erm...when is chapter 3 coming up?

Well, you need to fix some spelling things, and Holmes is slightly out of character. Not a lot, but a little.

Pretty good otherwise.

Great beginning... so would you PLEASE update!... pretty please?

oh, intriguing... sad that it has not been continued.

curious that holmes is so arrogant as to claim that he really is a thinking machine... i can easily picture him claiming to try to be so, but to have the temerity to declare himself one? of course, if it stated by him for the purpose of being disproved by you, i'm all for it. hee.

ah, the old question of 'what the heck does sherlock holmes think of irene adler'... you've done a good job with the ambiguity of it... i would have been curious to see where you took it.

Please, please, please, please update!

Please Please update !
The story is really good, more Holmes/Irene on FF !

its great, sounds just like conan doyle. Everything is pointing to Holmes and Irene and im interested to see if holmes actually would rethink his position on romantic feelings. it wouldnt seem like him to fall for Irene, though. I dunno. Keep going!

Impressive job with this one. I like the concept of this one, captures the real spirit of Arthur Conan Doyle. I wrote one as well in here which I did everything purposely. It is a Holmes story but hints to my influences as a horror writer - being I write in the Cthulhu Mythos as a horror writer, so you would see that in there. This one has a lot of Doyle's gothic elements.

I like it a lot!
It's great!

This is very good. Please update soon. What's up with Holmes, anyway?

Nice fic! Could u just let me know when u submit the next chapter?

It would be too sad if you wouldn't continue this interesting plot

Hey! don't make a cliffhanger now!

the story is getting more interesting.

Please continue your story.

Too bad this isn't finished.

Was this only written as a romantic teaser?

-. Don't worry, I won't tell.