Loved this story! Anything fluffy 9/Rose just makes me smile :)

I love the way you portray Rose and Nine. Their characterizations are spot on! I was particularly tickled with the Doctor talking to Rose with the bathroom door between them, and then him trying very hard not to look at her in that fetching little red number! ; )

But my absolute favorite was the Doctor and Rose's reactions when she suddenly remembered that they kissed.

"You kissed me."

He immediately dropped from sight again, retreating behind the safety of the wall.

"I was drugged," he explained, a little too quickly. "And you started it."

I can TOTALLY picture Christopher Eccleston's face and him hiding behind the wall - priceless!

As much as I love Ten (and he will always be my Doctor), I do have a soft spot for Nine, as well (he was my FIRST Doctor, after all).

I know it's been a while since you've written this, but I want you to know how much I enjoyed it! You write so well and you've got the characters down perfectly.

Keep up the good work.

LLAP

This was sweet and I really like it, or at least the ending and later chapters. Not so much the beginning; exposition blah. I had a lot of fun reading this, so keep writing your stories!

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BUNNY

Aww! That was an awesome story! And I'm glad you didn't make them hop in bed togehter in the end!

I want to go and visit the planet of six foot tall slugs! They sound interesting! Where's the Doctor when you need him?

amazing story!

Great story, nice little adventure. Love the fact that it's well-written, a rarity in fanfic. Yay! I'm off to read more of your stuff.

Great work! I love it!

I've been making my way through your Doctor Who fics, and really like the lot of them. This is a good adventure, with lots of description and a new sort of situation.

Brilliant fic! Very well-written, with an excellent plot, and I loved the Dr/Rose beginnings of a 'ship.

FAB :-D

Jess x

Really great story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. There's so much hope in it. U write all the characters brilliantly. Thanks for posting! Keep it up :- )

Really great look at the early days of the Doctor and Rose. It made me smile a lot. Rose's character is really well written and explored. Keep it up :- )

brilliant, the details are just brilliant! this is what makes for a good fanfiction

I read the first 4 chapters of this last night but finally had to give up at half past midnight!

It's strange cause I re-watched Aliens Of London on BBC3 and then the Confidential Cut Down,"I get a side-kick out of you", all about Rose. And in it Chris says (which made me squeal!):

'It's a love story. It's like love at first sight in a way.'

And then later I read this from this chapter:

'He didn’t believe in anything so ridiculous as love at first sight; what a half-witted human idea that was. That kind of bond, if properly done, was meant to be about respecting and getting to know someone, not instant physical attraction based on chemicals.'

It's just strangely coincidental and I just thought I'd mention it! I think it shows that whilst the Doctor may *think* he doesn't believe in love at first sight, it's pretty clear to the rest of us that he does!

ANYWAY, onto your fic!

I think it's brilliant! I loved how Rose was dancing with him in the nightclub place, and how he feels so guilty about it, and when he dumped her in the water trough I was shaking with laughter.

So I've come back to read the rest! yay!