Truly a great story. Thank you for none of those ever-annoying author's notes... good work stands on its own, and a good author doesn't need to explain their work or solicit reviews.

And I do hope that you're using your gift for writing for something beyond just fanfics.

This story was really great. I was actually surprised when I continued to enjoy it after chapter 10 or so. With Snarry romances that include taking down Voldemort it starts to get boring about halfway through, like when they actually get together and settle their relationship. Your's kept me interested though.
Hope to read more from you in the future.

I like this story so far, but this chapter brings up a question. Given that it's more than likely not public knowledge (excepting the Order) that Severus is staying with Harry, how is it that he is doing magic. In the second book when Dobby performed a hover charm Harry got in trouble from the Ministry for underage magic. Meaning that the Ministry can detect underage magic to an extent, but they can't necessarily tell who is doing what magic. So how is it that Severus hasn't gotten in trouble yet? Or rather gotten Harry in trouble?

Aw, this story was so wonderful. I love mpreg stories, they work rather well. Magic can accommodate anything.

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