“Thank you, Your Grace,” Gohan said with a sweeping bow, one of his rare moments of attitude.

:D Good form! That was an awesome line. Very clever.

aws Piccolo and Gohan are the best duo ever!

Aw... Piccolo and Gohan have always been such great friends. Sniffle That was sweet... Piccolo is proud, and Gohan knows he's accomplished something! AAAAAAW! They're such great friends! ... Feels really cheesey now

I loved it! Very original and emotional, just they way I like it. Vegeta was a little too nice but that's ok, Veggie's da bomb! I really enjoyed it and I hope you write more. Ja matte ne!

awwww...how

woow, now that was harmony to the tee, vegeta and Piccolo acually getting along..with a: each other b: goku and c: every one else .Nice read.

That was interesting... I believe Vegeta is much too OOC, but that's just me. I think this could be a cool ongoing series, about them and how Gohan deals with working at Capsule Corps. Please write more!

that is soooo cute! vegeta was a bit ooc...but all in all it was really good.

oh... my...GOSH!WOW! Please write more like it!

Yiah! out of characterness! :grins: but that's okay, I still liked it. It was rather well written! Hopin' to read more!

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Great story! you should write more like. it's really good.

Pretty good! No visible grammar mistakes, no one acting horribly out of character...I give this one a 9 out of 10.

Good work! Liked it a lot. Interesting take on a moment that most others wouldn't see as a story opportunity. Thanks!

That was sweet.