well uh i really like your story, its very well thought out, nice storyline,and harry stands up for himself, which i find very cool. keep up the good writing! you rock!

i've been reading for a straight week. where is the next chapter! btw, not to critizize, but you might want to spell check a few things...other than that, you rock out loud

i cant wait for next chap.

It has been since 2007 that you updated. I am sad to believe that there will be no more. poo

Absolutely great! You have an amazing way of telling a story and it has kept me hooked. I love the way you have added to J. K. Rowling's characters and added more depth to them, I have only one problem with the story. Your word choice is a little off. You have either the wrong word but right sound or it's misspelled. I have had to read a sentence over a couple of times to make sure that I was reading it correctly. That is the only problem that I have with this story. Please keep up the good work. I can't wait to read the next chapter!! :D

this is an amazing story. i have rarely scene stories that have as many ideas and discriptions as yours, and even fewer that have this length. I cant wait to see how you will eventually end it. update again soon please.

great story please keep up the good work can't wait to find out what happens next please update soon

I am sorry for the many tragedies in your life. I hope life has improved. However I would like to see a new chapter in the Scorpion sorcerer. It is one of the best stories I have read in a while. I hope your muse has not left you.
I would be willing to help edit the story. I noticed you have some word errors.Simple mistakes that change the meaning of the story. Like taught instead of thought.taught means to learn something new: thought means to think abut something. Anyway let me know.

WOW! That was... I can't think of a word good enough to describe it! I never thought I would be saying this but this story is the second story good enough to be labeled as 3x ultimate favorite within the last 48 hours! To get that your story would have to be superb. And your story is! I am REALLY REALLY ANXIOUS for the next chapter! I can't tell you how just how awesome I think this story is!!

This is simply an amazing fanfiction, however I am sad to see that there hasnno been an update in over two years. poo.

I can't believe how vindictive Harry was. I was almost in tears and even now I'm still feeling a little queasy. The part I hated the most was when he used the Imperious and what he had them do. That's just... sick and wrong!

That confrontation was awesome! I love how it was done!

Hi there I have just finished reading your story and have found it quite good and I hope to be reading more of it real soon...

awesoem story, love it! Looks liek you want update it anytiem soon, but i am still looking forward to see thsi finished. :)

Wow, what a truly utterely awesome! I love the way that young Harry learned about the betrayal by Albus Dumbledore, Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger! Especially the way that he both deals with this betrayal and strikes out for his freedom from manipulations and his very life! I particularly like the way that Harry showed that he is a "true heir of hogwarts" by showing that he has the qualities of gryffindor, ravenclaw, hufflepuff and slytherin. I think the reason it took so long, is due to how Harry suffered child abuse all his life at the hands of the Dursleys because of Dumbledore's manipulations in regards to James and Lily's wishes in their will. I loved the way that he got rid of the death eaters in battle and got up the upper-hand on MoldyShorts war funds, hehe! Once again, a brilliant story to which I can't wait to read more!