Dear God, that was a hot way to lose her virginity. Reading this seriously made the room around me warmer with each new paragraph. Thank goodness for balcony doors that can be opened for fresh air!

Steamy and dreamy and delicious. I love it.

wow that was so good!

AW! I love it!

I like it! Is there more?

Most certainly a preferable ending to the insanity that was Season 4 Finale.

Actually - a delightful read altogether!

wanna petition for CMM back? lol. Nothing better could happen to this show.

loved it update soon

hahahaha :) *giggles*

thanks, deni :)

Very good. An extremly clever beggining...and I love smores, and hot chocolkate, so this was even more yummy! Keep writing, you're really good!

Ash

this is such a good story i hope that wasnt the end of it. it describes them both perfectly. Keep writing, your very good at it.

awesome, this was like the greatest one i've ever read.

That was really sweet. And hot!

great story, cya later.

That? Was really sweet.

Just beautiful.

wow you use really discritive wording. But you should really update your story.

Awesome Fic. I loved your technique at hte beginning, making the reader think that they were having sex... I however laughed when I realized that they were sking!