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Reviews For: Convergence

Shade-Duelist 2005-12-02 ch 3,	abuseDeirdre and Zakharov should get together, they'd make such a cute pair... ^_^ Nice story, i would love to write one as good as this one!
MissWulf 2005-07-10 ch 3,	abuseI like it so far. I believe that the last chapter with Miriam could have been more...interesting, but that is my own mind. This is still a really good fic so far though.
aethelswin 2005-05-26 ch 3,	abuseI'm curious as to what happens next, so I hope school pressures lighten up soon. At first I thought that your characters didn't seem bright enough to be faction leaders, but lots of real-life political leaders aren't too bright, so I guess that's okay. Zakharov may be a bit long in the tooth for Deirdre, and this is exacerbated when she seems to act like a teenager. That's a minor quibble though, and I shall summon up my ample reserves of willing suspension of disbelief to deal with it.
DarknessQueen 2005-04-27 ch 3,	abuseAw. This is good, and cute, all at the same time. I'm loving the storyline, and the D/Z interaction, it all seems very real, and is very well written out. Your grammar and spelling is superb. Keep up the awesome work, and good luck with your writing!
Reflectivity 2005-04-21 ch 1,	abuseA very VERY good piece of work here, it shows a lot of promise and you certainly know what your doing. You should be proud of it. The only thing is, I thinked the Z&D romance is a bit cliched now, and to be honest I never really thought it worked in the first place. So those are my two cents, I don't think you should change your story or anything- especially since the Z&D thing is so central to the plot. 10/10

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