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Reviews for: Heartbeat of an Angel
JustMe
2009-10-25 . chapter 2
This is such a beautiful story. I know it's been a VERY long time since you've updated, but i DEFINITELY agree with Deth101-Fox Version, this stroy is much more meaningful to us readers than you probably think. your mind has thought up of an idea so brilliant, I can't describe it. Beautiful work, the best I've read in years. ♥
burgundy eyes
2009-01-28 . chapter 2
this story is so breathtaking. it's very sad and emotional. i hope it's not finished. i agree with the comment below. you should really continue this story.
Death101- Fox Version
2008-08-19 . chapter 2
I demand that you write more for this story- please. This story is amazing and shouldn't be left unfinished. You have left far too many questions. Even when a story ends at as a cliff-hanger there aren't this many questions. Why is it forbidden? Why is Nakuru so sad? Why is Yue sad? What happens if an angel falls in love? How did Yue know how she was feeling? Why was he at that place in the first place? What does the line 'As I opened my eyes, I saw a girl that looked like her…and all the memories flooded back' mean? Did he meet another girl as well as Nakuru or did he not recognize her? Do they ever meet again? What happens to Yue and Nakuru now? Please write another chapter so that these questions may be answered.

I know that fic has not been updated since 05 and that you probably have forgotten where you were going with this, but I beg you to make up a new plot if you have forgotten the original. Redo the previous chapters if you must but please don't leave this story idea to rot in the pits of cyber space! If you don't want to write it, fine. Tell someone your ideas for the plot and ask them to write it. In fact, I volunteer. If you don't want to write this but have an idea of what you wanted in the first place, I'm willing to take your idea and write something hopefully worthy of your praise. I would send you the chapters so that you have the final say in it. If you don't want me to write it please find someone else to write it. This story has potential, and I don't believe it is right for it to remain unfinished! Please reply back to me so that I know what is going on with this story and please don't ignore me. If I have angered you tell me. Throw the rule of 'if you can't say anything nice, don't say anything at all' out the window and give it to me. Scream at me whether this story will have another chapter or not! I want/need to know if this story has any hope at all! Please tell me!

I have three more things to say before my review is done. I am sorry if I have angered you in any way. I am just angered because of so many amazing stories going unfinished. That was the first thing and here is the second thing, please don't delete this story either! Even if you have no wish to continue this anymore please don't remove it from the site. Removing this story from Fanfiction would be like removing humans from the Earth. The Earth would still live without the humans but something precious would have been lost. Finally, your story is amazing and even if you don't reply back to me I will reread it and review a third time demanding an answer. If you don't reply again I will still reread this story and hope that there will be more because that is how amazing this story is. Thank you.

Hoping for an answer and a new chapter,
Daeth101- Fox version AKA MoonGuardian3007
Death101- Fox Version
2008-08-19 . chapter 1
Poor girl. Awesome job on this chapter. Even though it was short, I still felt sympathic for her.
-D101

P.S I'm MoonGuardian3007. I finally got an account and I demand to know whether you are dead or not! Please! Please! Write more for this story! I'm begging you.
MoonGuardian3007
2008-06-26 . chapter 2
MORE MORE! MORE MORE! It's not done is it? I hope not... then again it hasn't been updated since 05... Please write some more. What happens to Yue? Why is it forbidden? What about Nakuru? What happens next? Please write some more. Even if it's just other short chapter. Please. And should you do please inform me. Thanks and I love your story!
-Mg3007
MoonGuardian3007
2008-06-26 . chapter 1
Aw, so sweet. Awesome job!
-MG3007
woofyy
2006-10-05 . chapter 2
aww !! i hope its not finished yet cuz it doesnt seem to be finished yet . i hope they'll end up together xD
sayumi hilashi
2005-06-29 . chapter 2
Please write another chapter! They should kiss sometime... Oh sorry! I'm a big fan of Ruby Moon/Yue but not a lot of people write it...well PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
KuriousKutiexox
2005-06-25 . chapter 2
wow this story is so emotional~~
good job♥♥
ReAcH
2005-04-27 . chapter 1
hmm... nice! i think the fic deserves a prequel, maybe from the "angel's" point of view this time. ;P i hope you'll make one, when you have the inspiration! =) till then!
xFilipina-Angelx
2005-04-23 . chapter 1
the chapter was really short, but it was good.
ScarletBloodDoll
2005-04-23 . chapter 1
Not bad it is Ruby and Yue right? I'm a little confused on that but its ok. Update soon...good detail...keep up the good work
Wind and Flame
2005-04-17 . chapter 1
Strange but softly touching.

Not bad.
crazee-animefwreak
2005-04-17 . chapter 1
wow! that was really good! and sad. is this about cardcaptors? is the girl sakura and the angel yukito? just wondering. if u want to answer my questions so i don't get confused. please email me.
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