"Everything else is only their elaborate funeral dance."- Favorite line. It really hits me too.

Beautiful and foreboding.

I LOVE it! ^^

Hey I loved this fiction. Im going to recomend it to my sister whom loves Kikyo and inuyasha. I do too. I like the way you put it giving it dept.

Nicely written story.

Yeah, I've been a little behind...okay I've been downright lazy but I'm catching up now.

I have I told you I love you lately? I love it when you dive into Kikyou and Inuyasha's relationship. You managed to explain some key things between them and make it very believable. Lovely work, as usual.

I can't believe it. For some reason, the first few lines of this piece seemed drab and dull (something to do with the setting and the ashes, maybe?), but now I'm just stunned by the vivid images and the hidden meanings in what's been said.

I love. There's mild romance, balanced by the promise of tragedy. There's a little discussion of the unfairness that gifted people are often forced to endure. There's ::blame:: placed on the two characters that we all feel so sorry for, and that's a wonderful thing. The idea of "evil" doesn't really seem to exist here; there are only accidents and misunderstandings that can grow into deaths.

The last paragraph is so beautiful. The last line most of all. Life compared to a funeral dance; the irony is almost too thick. =P

Wow, man, that is brilliant. I think it was the best thing I've read in a week. I love the idea of Kikyou meeting Inuyasha as a child, and the detail with the scent of ashes. How what she said led to Inuyasha's desire to have the jewel... that is incredible. Great flow.

It's a strange alternate place for Inuyasha and Kikyou to meet but I like it. :D

Meeting at first sight and there's already a sparked tension between them. It seems Inuyasha and Kikyou trusted each other (something about being alone fits the two together ^_^) and I like how there's a HINT of the two being alright with each other although there's no words to say to prove it.

Wonderfully angsty, nice oneshot where Kikyou isn't dead yet. ^__^ Nice.

That...was excellent...
Thank you. ^_^ Arigatou.