As someone who works in law enforcement, why isn't Sara suspicious that the guy is coming to her home when she first sees him? Her work wouldn't give anyone her address, but tell him to stop by when she's working or leave a message. Him showing up on her doorstep should have made Sara suspicious from the moment she saw him, wondering how he got her address.

great story! I love the last two lines especially!

Okay, had a mental breakdown while I was reviewing 'To This I say, Chivalry is Dead, Sir', so you're getting to reviews in one. I love your sense of humor- Sara's personality is always spot on, as is Grissom's. Sometimes it's difficult to capture the wittiness Sara possesses, but you do an excellent job of it in 'To This I say...'

He Ain't Heavy is another wonderful piece... I love your writing. The final few paragraphs were painfully sweet, and their realizations in the third chapter were so bittersweet it hurt. Brava!

~IGC t DM

I have to tell you, it's amazing how you make me feel. You are very talented. The poetry of the dialogue is there, and it feels so natural. I love it.

Quite a twist with the twin options! I enjoy a well-done twin story, and Sara smacking Grissom down with Barzini's phenotype is sweet to read. It's the last line that wins this, though, wham. :D

GASP! How is it possible that I've never read this story. It's so beautiful and in character. Definitely a favorite.

i really enjoyed that story. liked the angst and the realization for grissom. awesome stuff.

Very beautiful ending. I've been reading your fics and I just love the dialogue-- very realisitc.

ohh wow, i have no idea how i caught on to this so late, but wow, very nice!

It was good that you ended it that way. The setting was made more real because of that. Smart read.

Awesome ending! Great story! Thanks for posting it! Keep writing!

Damn. Crazy chapter. I loved it! Barely tore my eyes off the screen too. Awesome story!

Oh man, that was terrific.

I was stunned by Grissom's admission to Sara but not really shocked. Does that make sense? We all know that Grissom would do anything for Sara -just hearing him say it that way was...made it real.

Great story. You should follow this up. I would love to know how are awkward pair work through a relationship.

That was pretty emotional. And that guy was creepy! Glad Grissom showed up in the nick of time because Mr. Freak had nothing nice planned for Sara.

I love when Grissom takes charge!