Much Ado About Nothing! That's genius! It fits perfectly! I did that play in school. It was very funny! This is the perfect idea froMel and Dom!

Love it!

the holiday is midwinter not midsummer just a suggestion so people don't get confused

aah, the classic bickering is the best. much ado about nothing. nice :)

this was great! i love tamora pierce and all her storys =) and ive been looking for a fanfic about it this is the first one ive found 5/5!

Haha. That was a great story. I was a little worried when Kel said "I will be yours!" I just can't see her saying that, but everything else was perfect. I really liked Neal in this or rather that he got slapped a lot. The ending was great too. That's exactly how I see it happening too. I had a lot of fun reading this. Thank you.

I just finished reading this and I really love it! It is really quite funny and I can picture Kel and Dom doing this sort of thing. But I have to admit that I don't think that they would be fighting. But hey, it was a good story with a good story line. Keep writing!

I loved your story! I also really liked the play of Much Ado about Nothing in there - the Benedick/Dom Beatrice/Kel thing. Awesome!

THAT was AMAZING!

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very funny ending! glad there was a bit of arguing, a bit of fluff, a bit of danger and adventure...a bit of everything! brilliant fic, definitely a favourite. well done :)

agh! dom isnt a knight

Wow...that was...incredible. With all the fluff and humor and action, it was fantastic!!

I like the story but, you know, Dom is not a knight... other than that, it's a good story!

got to love that last bit! enjoyed reading your story. it was very worth while. ^^

I ABSOULTY LOVE THIS AND IV ONLY READ THE 1ST PAGE IM TOTALLY HOOKED!