Aww...it's so touching...you have successfully touched me to tears. It's brilliant. =P

Oh wow! How wonderful to see Sanzo as an innocent child! Even in the show, when they show Kouryuu as a child he is 13, and it seems like his innocence has already been worn down by the other monks. I love this fic!

I think that this story is wonderfully written and it flows so well. I can't wait for more. ^^

it's rare to find someone who writes from this point in the story... and i love the little twist at the end.

Once again, another one of your fics leaves me (almost) speechless. I'm really surprised English isn't your first language, because your work is stunning. Kouryuu's so innocent here, and it's even more heartbreaking when I read about Koumyou's hopes for the boy, since we all know how THAT'S going to turn out.

Aw...it's kind of sad...but really good. I can't wait to read more.

Wow, that was really good! Hope to see part 2 soon!

OMG that's really good! I liked it alot. Koryuu seems so un-Sanzo like ^^ I love the descriptions and the variety of sentence structures and vocab, and it's set out well. They talk like would be expected, and the names are well suited ^^ 11/10!

-L.Ikari

~ Whaddaya mean I'm like Sanzo?! Don't compare me to that foul mouthed - *thwak*~