...Why am I laughing so hard? XP That was disgusting, and yet extremely amusing, so don't take it in a bad way. Bagel sex, huh? *grossed-out shiver* Congratulations on your originality. (:

Wow...that was weird, and het strangely...wonderful. xD
I seriously lmao'ed. x3 lol
But, then again, I hate Tohma. :D So, thefore I love your fiction
lol
Yuki almost lost his cool there, but hes so colected. I would'a screeched. o.o;;

This was the best lemon thing EVER! Never in a million years would i picture anyone with a bagel of all things. Very original! I have to send this to my friends!

Oh my goodness! Finally some one how hates Touma as much as I do and not to mention that you also made fun of him! Yes! Kill two birds wit hone stone! This story was off da chain!

LMFAO!! I got my friend to send me the link to this after she told me the Tohma x Bagel pairing. That is so hillarious! I'm still in hysterics even if I am scarred for life. To top it off my brother is very strange and has a habbit of yelling "Bagel Alarm" to wake me up. He did that the day after i read it. He looked so confused as to why i was laughing! Great fic!!

omfg! that was hillarious! tohma fucking a bagel. *falls over laughing* that's creative. awesome job!

Absolutely hilarious! I had seen your fic countless times but, everytime I told myself not to read it. The Tohmaxbagel thing seemed far too weird. I was right though. It wasa really, really weird. I love Tohma but, this was way too awesome to pass up.

When I was reading I was just covering my eyes and screaming, "I can't read it! I CAN'T READ IT!" But I did and it was very traumatizing. Hurray for traumatizing! I will nwver eat another bagel again. Maybe... Love!

LMAO! That was so great. ^_^

'Toumaxbagel' looked pretty funny in the summary.
but OMG! Mabye Touma will never get over the embarassment!
Heck...I can't over the embarassment either.^^'
You did an uber job of weirding me out you(pervert).^_^

Strangly enough I liked it.

lol XD
so funny... tohma and a bagle XDD
i just cant stop laughing...
n yuki kicks him out lol... maybe he wanted to eat that bagle at any time?? XD
YaY
That was fun~~

ek! I love that story soo much! Make more, now! I demand more bagel!

YOU SHOULD SO WRITE A SECOND CHAPTER! I would so read that! I would also like to add that I have written two short 1/2 page comics about this story. If you want to see them, you can e-mail me, and I can try to send you the scanned images. It's just stick figures. BTW whatever happened to the bagel? Did Shuichi eat it on accident...

I have to agree that this needs some sort of continuation. Perhaps Tohma trying to reconcile with Yuki after having had his... fun. Or perhaps Shuichi finding the mess and thinking Yuki had done it. There's too much potential with this. And yes, very well written, though perhaps a few misspellings here and there.