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| Vilya0 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abusePrepare for a review! Make it quintuple you know you want to! Cute! I like it when Ash shows love to his mum, in the show he always looks annoyed by her and never calls when he's away (but calls Professor Oak all the time O.o). I never thought Brock fancied Delia, that's certainly a first. I really enjoy it. ^_^ I hope you write some more Pokémon fiction goodness! So few authors write the characters as well as you do. So this is it. I'm signing off again...! *final bing* |
| K.T.Waterflower 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI really like it. Even dough I expect a little more romance. It was very funny. It was very sweet and it shows what sugar do to you when you have too much ^_^. |
| Spottedfire 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseI was laughing almost the whole time. Max and the candles was haliarious! And when they all cried together in the end, wonderful! Nice use of actual history, too. This was, just, the funniest story I have ever read! |
| prettygirl17 2007-05-03 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! That was great writing! It's so cute! Definately going to my favorites! |
| Airess Byrd 2007-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this story! It's soo cute :) |
| Arrow 2007-03-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked the sugar part between Ash and Misty. |
| Fia 2006-11-24 ch 1, anon. | abuse*chuckle* Quite a family! Definatly! '^_^ |
| Fia 2006-10-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseHA HA HA! OH MY GOSH, I'M LAUGHING HYSTERICALY! MAX - WAS ACTING - SO - FUNNY! HA HA HA! |
| dinobot 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abusetwo of our favorite people baking a cake...hilarious, funny, sweet (bunch of other complementive adjectives) enjoyed it. hope you make more AAML soon. |
| BanditPonyta 2006-02-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was incredibly awesome. I love how Max was getting hysterical over the candles. Also, when Ash started crying, so everyone started crying. Wonderful, simply wonderful.I wish I had found this story sooner. |
| DestinyDeoxys 2006-02-01 ch 1, | abuseGood one-shot! I would be deeply honored if you would take the time to review my first fic. I'm still looking for some more reviews! |
| Harpiebird 2005-10-04 ch 1, | abuseLOL! Awesome fanfic! Hilarous at some points in the story. Great job! -Stephanie |
| Jirachi the Legend 2005-09-23 ch 1, | abuseLol! This is amazing! I was bursting out laughing with the whole "knife" thing, and Max running around like a maniac screaming "Candles!" is definately something I can imagine! Even though it was so funny, it was also touching and very sweet! Keep up the amazing writing and can't wait for the next installment of Cavern ^_^ ~Sarah AAML Forever! |
| Digimon American Cager 2005-09-10 ch 1, | abuseI like Ash and May the best. Misty sucks! |
| AinoMinako 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abuseThe pairings? Uh... Brock/Delia, May/Brock, and Eldershipping? Haha.. This is a great story! I can imagine Ash trying to bake a cake... It's not very pretty... |