Superb. Just that. Thanks for the sweet masterpiece.

I recently found this story and I must tell you that I enjoyed it inmensely! You're a talented writer, and I LOVED this! It was so cute, and I can totally picture it happening. It also made me laugh out loud, which is good, so thank you very much for writing this :D

Aww, so cute. I love stories exemplifying Ash and Delia's kawaii mother-son relationship (and the Pokeshippy hints were welcomed, too). Ash was 100% adorable in this story, so sweet for baking his mom a cake (too bad it didn't turn out too good). I was also happy to see all the other characters like Brock, May, and Max got generous roles, too (I LOVED Max in this story, too). The balance of humor and drama really rounded this story out as having something for everyone. Superb one-shot!

Good one.

Prepare for a review! Make it quintuple you know you want to!

Cute! I like it when Ash shows love to his mum, in the show he always looks annoyed by her and never calls when he's away (but calls Professor Oak all the time O.o). I never thought Brock fancied Delia, that's certainly a first. I really enjoy it. ^_^

I hope you write some more Pokémon fiction goodness! So few authors write the characters as well as you do.

So this is it. I'm signing off again...! *final bing*

I really like it. Even dough I expect a little more romance. It was very funny. It was very sweet and it shows what sugar do to you when you have too much ^_^.

I was laughing almost the whole time. Max and the candles was haliarious! And when they all cried together in the end, wonderful! Nice use of actual history, too. This was, just, the funniest story I have ever read!

Oh wow! That was great writing! It's so cute! Definately going to my favorites!

I love this story! It's soo cute :)

I liked the sugar part between Ash and Misty.

*chuckle* Quite a family! Definatly! '^_^

HA HA HA! OH MY GOSH, I'M LAUGHING HYSTERICALY! MAX - WAS ACTING - SO - FUNNY! HA HA HA!

two of our favorite people baking a cake...hilarious, funny, sweet (bunch of other complementive adjectives) enjoyed it. hope you make more AAML soon.

That was incredibly awesome. I love how Max was getting hysterical over the candles. Also, when Ash started crying, so everyone started crying. Wonderful, simply wonderful.I wish I had found this story sooner.

Good one-shot! I would be deeply honored if you would take the time to review my first fic. I'm still looking for some more reviews!