cool... Um just throwing this out there but did anyone else notice thatt Kai is Russian but his last name is japanese... Weird...

OMGSH!! this story is awsome!! i love it! i read it all in one day today! Its very well written i wish i could write like you. i also love the was Kai cares for his Little sister Kana,...its sweet! well hurry up and finish the story!

Peace Out!!
*SaraMckenlee ^_~

Yay! Goodie good, loved it as always, can't wait to see the next. ttyl!
Storm

OMG! AN UPDATE! FINALLY! ^_^! I LOVE THIS FIC! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOREVER FOR AN UPDATE! I love how you ended the chapter. It's so right and good! ^_^

I've read, for the 3rd time, and I still love it!! Please tell me that some action is going to be coming, getting Carmen out of that bloody hosptial! (-kills hospital-) ...wait...that wouldn't be smart would it? WHoops. Anyways...romantic at heart deep down...I know Kai and Carmen are meant for each other! -dramatic pose-
More, I wanna see more...pwease?
Storm

LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! It... this is amazing. I always wanted to write an OC fic but it would always be a Mary Sue. :( This is a FANTABULOUSLY god story. Yes I know fantabulous isn't a word. There are no words to describe how truly amazing your... creation? no wait... BRAINCHILD! truly is keep it up!

-laughs nervously- hehehe umm hi there! wow long time no review! and I barely read chapter two. hehehe sorry!
Oc hm I'm not a huge fan of oc's but I've got to hand it to you cuz you got my attention and very few OC stories do that. I like your use of description. Good job!

hey i like ur story,make me on *puppy dog pout* hope you'll finish another one thanks...

J: *has transformed in one of those plastic life-size sheeps in her garden* ...You don't have to tell me I'm late... Argh.. we started 2 reviews for the chapter "to hide from seeking eyes"... Maybe i can find the opinion in our msn convo history... (may I add Esther and i have aproximatly 600 kb every month of convo history without including other persons we talk to...our highest amount of kb was 1200 something >.> Maybe that's why we can give a course to people about msn^^ (whaha, easy money, dear >:D)) Ah well...I'm to lazy. We probably liked it... And this chapter...I dunno *searches convo history and finds chatting about SW episode 3 (*pukes*), Batman, someone with a selective memory (right, E?),

E: *steps forth from the shadows* I'm so ashamed *bows head (wait... I can't bow my head cuz I don't have it! *snatches head away from you* so! ^__^) *bows head again** WE WERE TOO LATE! T_T
And we'll have to quit on the tandem reviews for a while as we rarely are both online long enough to write those monsters, sorry ^_^
I love the chapter, lol I finally start being able to keep those spirits apart ^-^ Lol Jess must be in heaven reading all those Russian names, kehe! XD I also saw some of your pictures. They're nice ^-^ (only I couldn't find the comment thingy... >.> where you can comment... (I'm not a member of that site... Could that have anything to do with it?))
I suddenly get the urge to sign up too >.> Ah well, different subject! *takes out "Standard Subject Manual"*

Lets see... *flips pages* AHA! How's the weather? Here we had a heatwave and now it's getting raine again... (man this is so lame)
Screw that book! (not literally) *throws it in the fireplace, pours wodka over it and sets it on fire*

You know? Our reviews are really less evil and chaotic if we review as seperate people... If Jess were in this I'd already have taken out my scythe twice and maybe decapitated someone by now ^__^

Well, ciao for now ^_^ *takes off hat and disappears in a poof of smoke*

P.S. Jessica will review for that chapter we missed reviewing, k? ^__^

I feel so sorry for Kai's sister, so does she have a spirit or not? I was a bit confused by that.

That was a really good chapter and I can't wait for you to update again.

T_T That's so sad! T_T Poor Kai, Kana and Ray! Oh well, keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh angst *grabs* I love angst!Heh, sorry about that. Lets just forget that happened, shall we?

Anyways moving on, nice chappie. We finally get to know what the spirits do *pokes them* and look like. But very little insight into the Ceridwen and Tarian love story. *sighs*
Ceridwen controls fire, right?
Uhh thats all I can think for now. Still, the chappie ended at an angsty note ^^
Cant wait to find to find out what happens next...do update soon!

Very good, I like it a lot, keep it up, and thanks for the reviews!
Storm

What a sad chapter. I love the way that the part with Rei is written. You understand Kai's reaction with out shifting views.

Update,
~Smoke Angel~