Excellent story. very well written and the dialogue crackles. I love the last line too.

that was so cute that it gave me severe cavaties! i love you!

wow. that was..intense. i strangely love it. and at the same time...well, i only have positive things to say cuz i thought it's how it should turn out, so that was a damn good story. WOW!

Loved it, I can't say anymore then that :-)
Truly loved it.
RaeAnne --(@

OH *claps* it was awesome!

But i'm still a Chase/ Cam person. =)

Best line.
"He smirked. Even in her sleep, she was nice."
Good.Charaters wre right on.
Thanks for this one. Keep on fanficing. ;)

great read! I'm glad you made him go to Cameron's house...normally she's the one seeking him out, if was good to see it in reverse. You don't have to continue this one, it's wonderful on it's own but I wouldn't complain if a saw another chapter or two a couple years down the road. Loved the last three lines, very poetic and apt to their current situation.