Sora undressing in front of a classroom..
-has a look of pure bliss-

wow...I feel so sorry for Sora. D:

I'm glad to see Riku's getting to him :D

Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^

hi. just some (hopefully useful) criticism. your sora is all over the place. it seems like he has multiple personalities. one minute he's shy, then he's all in your face confident. He liked his prostitute life, but then crys in self pity when reminded of it. i think you need to work on sora's character a bit more so it doesn't fluctuate throughout the story and leave plotholes.

D:>
I loved this! Are you gonna update anytime soon? Cos I hope so!!

Your little "So, nine months later," thing on your A/N made me think one thing:
BABY.
Lolololololol. Just kidding.

wow! I absolutely LOVE reading these! They are quirky and dramatic and funny. Its nice to see Sora is lightening up a bit and showing his true colours...nice =)

Sora has really low self esteem.
._.;
(I was too lazy to submit a review for chapter 3.)

And, Laguna... who is Laguna? I've heard his name, but I don't know who he is. ._.;;

Moving on...
I really want to thank you for writing this. I was.. being bored, and I stumbled across this story. It's amazing, so far. And I hope you continue to update!
:]
Mahalia.

why? you need to update SOON and NOW! Its been like a year or whatever so I'm putting you on story alert!

I love this story! Poor, screwed-up Sora. Can't wait to hear the rest of it!

Ahh I love this! Hell.. I love all your KH fics. xD Update them? Pretty please? -puppy eyes-
I really do love this plotline though, it's different and new, it's really fun to read! ^^

*Growls at Author* Why haven't you updated this! It's been over a year! I love this pairing and this story!

No offense, but your Sora needs some work. It's like every reaction he has bounces from semi-fitting his background to fitting a five-year-old. For a second he's emotionless, then he explodes, gets embarrassed and self-conscious, and finally he goes into 'I don't care what people think' mode... What are you doing? Trying to fit a little bit of every stereotype out there into his one character?
Here's what you do:
Settle on a back story, a couple NON-paradoxical personality quirks that fit his background, and, unless you're going to make him bipolar, give his emotion-changing a little bit of logical sense! He can't be mellow when meeting someone, then immediately act like they've known each other forever and start spewing out his family history!
For goddssakes, are you making a obvious Mary-Sue, or what?

MORE!

Oh! I'm totally hooked on this story! O__O I just spent forever and a half reading all of it... I want more.. =(

Guh, you know what's annoying? It's stories I /really/ like, like this one. You want to know why? Well, because you put a lot of time into writing these chapters and stories out, you know? And then what do you get in return? Short little reviews from random people who probably only spent about a minute to write it. I don't know, I always feel like I should do more! Throw a party! Sing a song and let confetti fall all over the place! DANCE and erm.. Make you cupcakes! Yeahh =)

Rofl, xDD Okay. You have to understand it's 4:30 in the morning.. haha, me and my insomia have stayed up to read this amazing story^ _ ^

Really, I really /really/ liked it! It's great =o
I just hope you update soon... ? Please? Hee, xDD

ah. you should update.
like really really really soon.



oh and.
i feel awful for know people like that are out there too.
and.
i wonder what riku is planning.
okay no i dont wonder.


but..
i do wonder when your going to update xD





damn im typing slower and slower nowadays.
summers getting to me.

update soon please!