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| aanimec15 2008-03-09 ch 1,  | abuseAmazingly beautiful! You have a real knack for writing stories. Congrats! |
| Andrew 2007-10-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseAnother great EdWin story. I was nice to see Ed acting kind without deviating too much from his character. If you keep writing, I'll keep reading! |
| Electromagnetic Interferenc... 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuseLove This One Too! |
| FanFictionFanatic 2007-02-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe ending seems a little presuptuous on Winry's part. Nice anyway. |
| lilpunkrocker101 2007-01-05 ch 1, | abusebeautiful! |
| Iridaceae 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abusevery sweet! great description, and i loved the ending! |
| ShortySC22 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseAw this was a really cute Ed and Winry! I love how Ed, Einry, and Al interacted here. Good job! |
| deafualtninja 2006-01-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw! That's so sweet! Ilike how you kept ed's charcter consistant throughout, sometimes in romances fics he acts really swaet, but not like ed. |
| Angelic Devila 2006-01-08 ch 1, | abusePretty good! I see a slight maturity. |
| S J Smith 2005-12-23 ch 1, | abuseI've just reread this story and was surprised I didn't comment the first time I read it. It's very lovely and a little on the sad side. The emotional impact of it builds nicely and I like the fact that you're showing a more mature version of Ed. Thanks for sharing this with us. |
| fullmetalwinry 2005-12-09 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was really good! ur stories r so good! keep it up! Oh and it's really funny because i was listening 2 the song 4ever by the Veronicas and it was perfect with this story! ps keep it up with ur story TAKEN AWAY best one yet! |
| Rissell C 2005-11-13 ch 1, | abuseI love this mature Ed. He drives me wild. *smiles* It's adorable. |
| Dokuro-chan 2005-09-09 ch 1, | abuseomfg that was...was it bad?...was it good?...NOPE! IT WAS... THE BEST! |
| Hellokitty-4-ever 2005-08-15 ch 1, | abuseaw! kawaii...*sniffles* Now that I think about it...You know how many girls would die to switch places with Winry in this fic? lol. Much Love, Kitty PS. *twitches* This is considered a short review for me...*twitches* I think I've have a fever... |
| miroku-has-darkness 2005-08-04 ch 1, | abuseit was so touching |