Yay Bowser! Glad to see him appear with his snow globe bit! *sigh* Mario wants to fight Bowser so bad that he doesn't realize PEACH IS BEING TAKEN BY GRODUS, sometimes him and Bowser act clueless.

I'll be reading more of the fic!

I meant the Fanfic Recommendations section of . This is what I get for posting before proofreading my post.

I had to sign up just to tell you how brilliant this story is. You built tons of story upon the canon without breaking it, you gave tons of depth to characters who otherwise lacked it and you made me really feel for the plight of Vivian, Koops, etc. Sturgeons Law claims that 90% of everything is crap. You are proof that the remaining 10% is worth dying for. Well done.

P.S: I've added this fanfic to the Fanfic Recommendations section of to spread the word of this great story.

I think it's kinda funny how you said you hate anything that takes anything too seriously, and that you love cute, playful games/anime on your profile. Then I read the 1st chapter of your most famous story and got to see Vivian get her skull beaten in with a ** AC support. Slightly misleading, but if my infatuations with Manhunt and Hellsing are any indication, I eat this stuff up like Pappa John's Pizza topped with majic mushrooms. Gritty, bloodthirsty, psychopatic storytelling is where I live, and I can already see why It's so popular. Hope the rest of the story just as good.

And that innkeeper is such a jackass! Viv gets a free bed when her decrepid old ** of a sister wails on her, but I show up, in peril and practically falling apart after duking it out with Bonetail and she makes me cough up hard earned money! Is that really any way to treat The Great **' Gonzales?!

Just like "Aladdin"!

Incredible. So much time and thought into a pairing even I(the self proclaimed master of strange pairings)couldn't have posibly comprehended.(BTW please make more) I can't think of ONE SINGLE THING I didn't like. A personal first. You gotta understand i'm not just talking about fanfiction.OR books.Inheritance cycle,Final Fantasy,Harry Potter,Paper Mario...(wink)can not even attempt to hold a shadow of a candle to the masterpece you've created. Now I don't know how you'll take this,since some people see this as an insult,and I can see why they would,but I want to say it anyways. With a little alteration,it could be a exellent plot for a Paper Mario game. Why get mad? Well,because games are normally about interaction and adventure,even if some do have stories,there not made for description,so I would think a lot of romance would be cut out. But I suppose it's best it's not. Any game,even if coded by the creators themselves,couldn't do it justice. Well,i've tried to give you the highest praise possible,so there's only one thing left to do...

A toast to the perfect fic,with it's captivating characters,plot,side story,and epic conclusion.

Here,here!

Wow... Amazing...

At first i thought this was gonna be ANOTHER Dimentio X Vivian story!! i HATE those stories.. or any where Dimentio falls in love... its mostly me just being terribly jealous of the girl who falls in love with him... haha

...oh wow...well done,i'm not totally clear on the reason why the stars needed to kill Vivian,or how she miactously returned from the dead or what that whole bit with Marilyn being saved from drowning or what the hey is with the lady in white/Queen Lorelei or whatever and her offspring...maybe i'm just stupid. but i'm still faving this story :)

Write On!


Rere.

nice! but i kinda don't like how Miss Mowz is so... interfering with everything, like a match-maker...ugh.

nice, but it would be great if you could explain more how Lillian died,i mean,she kind of just keeled over dead,was it a heart-attack or something?

jeeze, that baby yoshi's a jerk! i mean, what's his issue?
anyway,nice going, keeper up!

wow, Waffles was a little heartless. forget them and let them drown? yesh.

Hm. I thought that it would be Toadsworth. Not Swee T. I mean, I remembered Swee T., but I figured that Peach's Caretaker would be the descendant. (Shrugs) Oh well. Good story! Shippo Out!

Good for Vivian. She finally found someone nice to be with. Also, you should hear my Yoshi's name. He's a Black yoshi and I call him Miles. Great chapter! Shippo Out!